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Write a letter to your freind from an english speaking country ,who wants to visit your country in your letter.invite him and his parents .tell him what places they should visit in your country .give home some useful advice .

Write a letter to your freind from an english speaking country, who wants to visit your country in your letter. invite him and his parents. tell him what places they should visit in your country. give home some useful advice. BaMeV
Dear balreet, Hello! how are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I am writing this letter you to because I want to visit in India with your family. I knew that your parents are very excited because they would be visited in india first time. I think November and December month would be pleasant for exploring the india as well as you can enjoyed the spicy food. I know that you made a list of places where you are want to gone but I'd like to suggest you most popular places in india is Taj mahal in Agra and the golden temple in Amritsar. Both places are very wonderful! I 'd be recommended to you some advice because you don't know about the india weather. In winter times weather would be more cold and Harsh that's why all bring some warm clothes and jackets. It would be beneficial for all and another one thing is that, due to corona pandemic would be use person protective measures at areas such as mask and sanitizers. I look forward to meeting you in winter. With love, Sara.
Dear
balreet
,

Hello!
how
are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I am writing this letter you to
because
I want to visit in India with your family.

I
knew that your parents are
very
excited
because
they would
be visited
in
india
first
time.
I
think
November and December month would be pleasant for exploring the
india
as well
as you can
enjoyed
the spicy food.

I
know that you made a list of places where you are want to
gone
but
I'd like to suggest you most popular places in
india
is
Taj mahal
in Agra and the golden temple in Amritsar. Both places are
very
wonderful!

I 'd
be recommended
to you
some
advice
because
you don't know about the
india
weather. In winter times weather would be more
cold
and Harsh that's why all bring
some
warm clothes and jackets. It would be beneficial for all and another one thing is that, due to corona pandemic would be
use
person protective measures at areas such as mask and sanitizers.

I look forward to meeting you in winter.

With
love
, Sara.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your freind from an english speaking country, who wants to visit your country in your letter. invite him and his parents. tell him what places they should visit in your country. give home some useful advice.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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