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Your are working in a manufacturing unit you co-worker harassed you number of times during your work write a letter to your hr department

Your are working in a manufacturing unit you co-worker harassed you number of times during your work write a letter to your hr department gGGDa
Dear Mariam, I am writing this mail concerning some unfortunate events occured to me in past few weeks on the permises of out unit. I had to face some racial words from my co-worker Dan Smith on several occations. During initial days I ignored him in hope he will stop, but these instense are increasing everyday. Additionally, I have come to know two more colleagues are facing same behaciour from Dan Smith. However, as they are new employees, they dont want to make a complaint against him. These episodes occured to me mostly on Friday evenings, last instence occured on 15th of July 2021 in computer room on first floor. I warned Dan not to behave like this anymore, but he started abusing and threatning me in fround of my team. This time I recorded how Dan behaves and I would like to present it to you in person. Please let me know sny suitable time to meet. Moreocver I would like to add I am really depressed due to what happned in last couple of weeks I hope you look into this matter and bring Dan to the book. I thank you in antiicipation. Regards Joe
Dear Mariam,

I am writing this mail concerning
some
unfortunate
events
occured
to me in past few weeks on the
permises
of out unit. I had to face
some
racial words from my co-worker Dan Smith on several
occations
. During initial days I
ignored
him in hope he will
stop
,
but
these
instense
are increasing
everyday
.
Additionally
, I have
come
to know two more colleagues are facing same
behaciour
from Dan Smith.
However
, as they are new employees, they
dont
want to
make
a complaint against him.

These episodes
occured
to me
mostly
on Friday evenings, last
instence
occured
on 15th of July 2021 in computer room on
first
floor. I warned Dan not to behave like this anymore,
but
he
started
abusing and
threatning
me in
fround
of my team.

This time I recorded how Dan behaves and I would like to present it to you in person.
Please
let
me know
sny
suitable time to
meet
.
Moreocver
I would like to
add
I am
really
depressed due to what
happned
in last couple of
weeks


I hope you look into this matter and bring Dan to the book. I thank you in
antiicipation
.

Regards

Joe
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IELTS letter Your are working in a manufacturing unit you co-worker harassed you number of times during your work write a letter to your hr department

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196 words
6.0
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