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Your english freind want to come in india with family .how to invite her parents. Say what places is better for visit .what advice you want to give her

Your english freind want to come in india with family. how to invite her parents. Say what places is better for visit. what advice you want to give her MllBN

Dear Barrett, Hello! How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I am writing this letter you to because you want to visit in India with your family. I knew that your parents are very excited because they will visiting in India first time. I think November and December month would be pleasant for exploring the India as well as you can enjoy the spicy food. I know that you made a list of places where you are want to go but I'd like to suggest you most popular places in India is Taj Mahal in Agra and the golden temple in Amritsar. Both places are extremely wonderful! I 'd like to give some advice because you don't know about the India weather. In winter times weather would be more cold and Harsh that's why you all have to bring some warm clothes and jackets. It would be beneficial for all and another one thing is that, due to corona pandemic, you have to use person protective measures at areas such as mask and sanitizers. I look forward to meeting you in winter. With love, Sara.

Dear Barrett,

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because
 you want to visit in India with your family. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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very
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because
 they will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "visit"visit
visiting
 in India first
 time. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 November and December month would be pleasant for exploring the India as well
 as you can enjoy the spicy food. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know that you made a list of places where you are want to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I'd like to suggest you most popular places in India is Taj Mahal in Agra and the golden temple in Amritsar. Both places are extremely
 wonderful! I 'd like to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advice This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you don't know about the India weather. In winter times weather would be more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 and Harsh that's why you all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 warm clothes and jackets. It would be beneficial for all and another one thing is that, due to corona pandemic, you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 person protective measures at areas such as mask and sanitizers.

I look forward to meeting you in winter.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, Sara. 