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Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office

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Respected Sunny Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing to you to draw your attention regarding our discussion for my movement in another premise. As discussed with you in the personal meeting last week, I request you to accept my proposal for shifting me to our branch office at Juhu area in Mumbai. As you are aware of the financial issue that I am facing due to this pandemic, I am unable to bear the cost of my only living in the city of Ahmedabad. However, to cut-off the expenses, I have decided to move back to my hometown by the end of this month. Sir, It will be appreciated if I am allowed to work with the same company near my stay in Mumbai. I ensure to serve the firm with full dedication and enthusiasm. I shall be visiting this workplace once in every month. Looking forward to your positive response. Your faithful, Kausha Patel Project Coordinator cum Business Analyst
Respected Sunny Sir,

Greetings of the day!

I am writing to you to draw your attention regarding our discussion for my movement in another premise. As discussed with you in the personal meeting last week, I request you to accept my proposal for shifting me to our branch office at
Juhu
area in Mumbai.

As you are aware of the financial issue that I am facing due to this pandemic, I am unable to bear the cost of my
only
living in the city of Ahmedabad.
However
, to
cut
-off the expenses, I have decided to
move
back to my hometown by the
end
of this month. Sir, It will
be appreciated
if I am
allowed
to work with the same
company
near my stay in Mumbai. I ensure to serve the firm with full dedication and enthusiasm. I shall be visiting this workplace once in every month.

Looking forward to your
positive
response.

Your faithful,

Kausha
Patel

Project Coordinator
cum
Business Analyst
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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