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Neighbours have written a complain letter for the noise from your flat Reasons for noise Apologise What actions you will take.

Neighbours have written a complain letter for the noise from your flat Reasons for noise Apologise What actions you will take. aql39
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Sidhu, I am writing this letter to express how sorry I am after getting your complain letter. Please allow me to elaborate the reasons for the noise from my flat. Actually, last night one of my cousins got her result for the masters of Kinesiology, and she got rank 1 in our province. So, after declaration of her result, all her friends visit us to joy this precious moment. I was not at home last night and in this morning, I found that they played music so loud last night. Even it is not the only me, my whole family is really apologising for the trouble that you and you family had to face last night. I have already talked strictly to my cousin and made her understand that it was not the right way to celebrate your success. I have told her to take care of the everyone’s comfort around you. I assure nobody from my family will let you feel this kind of trouble again. Thanking you for your understanding. Sony.
Dear Mr. and Mrs.
Sidhu
,

I am writing this letter to express how sorry I am after getting your
complain
letter.
Please
allow
me to elaborate the reasons for the noise from my flat.

Actually, last night one of my cousins
got
her result for the masters of Kinesiology, and she
got
rank 1 in our province.
So
, after declaration of her result, all her friends visit us to joy this precious moment. I was not at home last night and in this morning, I found that they played music
so
loud last night.

Even it is not the
only
me, my whole family is
really
apologising
for the trouble that you and
you family
had to face last night.

I have already talked
strictly
to my cousin and made her understand that it was not the right way to celebrate your success. I have
told
her to take care of
the everyone
’s comfort around you.
I
assure nobody from my family will
let
you feel this kind of trouble again.

Thanking you for your understanding.

Sony.
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IELTS letter Neighbours have written a complain letter for the noise from your flat Reasons for noise Apologise What actions you will take.

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