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Letter to an antique shop

Letter to an antique shop BaMNa
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in selling an antique piece of material to your antique shop. I am fancy tom, a university student. I have heard about your shop from one of my friend. She had told that, your antique shop is the best one for selling and purchasing old pieces of things. Moreover, it is easily accessible as it is in the middle of the city. I would like to sell an antique furniture that has been used for nearly 50 years. it is made up of mahagony wood and have beautiful wood carving. this can be used as interior decor. This is a unique piece asit is our traditional table. I would like to sell this product for a favourable price. I wonder if I could get about a hundred dollar for this intricate piece of wood. Hence, I will be able to pay my university fee. Hoping that you will like the furniture. Looking forward for a favourable response. Yours faithfully, Fancy tom.
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in selling an
antique
piece
of material to your
antique
shop. I am fancy tom, a university student. I have heard about your shop from one of my friend. She had
told
that, your
antique
shop is the best one for selling and purchasing
old
pieces
of things.
Moreover
, it is
easily
accessible as it is in the middle of the city.

I would like to sell an
antique
furniture that has been
used
for
nearly
50 years.
it
is made
up of
mahagony
wood and have
beautiful
wood carving.
this
can be
used
as interior decor. This is a unique
piece
asit
is our traditional table.

I would like to sell this product for a
favourable
price. I wonder if I could
get
about a hundred dollar for this intricate
piece
of wood.
Hence
, I will be able to pay my university fee. Hoping that you will like the furniture. Looking forward for a
favourable
response.

Yours
faithfully
, Fancy tom.
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IELTS letter Letter to an antique shop

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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