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Recently your employer offered some employees the opportunity to work from home.write a letter to your manager requesting the same arrangement.You should say 1.why do you want to work from home? 2.Why should it be beneficial for the company and yourself?3.Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home

Recently your employer offered some employees the opportunity to work from home. write a letter to your manager requesting the same arrangement. You should say 1. why do you want to work from home? 2. Why should it be beneficial for the company and yourself? 3. Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home 75lg3
Dear Sir, I am Ammu, Seniour software developer of our company. I am writing this letter to request you to please allow me also at least two days of telecommunicating per week. My hometown is Mala, approximately 2 hours distance from our office. My traveling is long as well as traffic block faced day by day. I am convinient of work from home. Moreover I have one kid she is 3 years old so take care kid is also my responsibility. If you grant the permission of work from home, not only advantage of our firm, but also good for me. Because I have save more time, you permit telecommunicating. My village has excellent network coverage so I can work my best. I can work from home on Monday and Friday because these two days have more traffic. hoping to take good decision regarding this matter of my humble request. Yours faithfully, Ammu
Dear Sir,

I am
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Ammu
,
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Seniour
software developer of our
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company
. I am writing this letter to request you to
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please
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allow
me
also
at least two days of
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telecommunicating
per week.

My hometown is
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Mala
, approximately 2 hours distance from our office. My traveling is long
as well
as traffic block faced day by day. I am
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convinient
of
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work
from home.
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Moreover
I have one kid she is 3 years
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old
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so
take care kid is
also
my responsibility.

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work
from home, not
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only
advantage of our firm,
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but
also
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good
for me.
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Because
I have
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save
more time, you permit
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telecommunicating
. My village has excellent network coverage
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so
I can
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work
my best.

I can
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work
from home on Monday and Friday
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because
these two days have more traffic.

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hoping
to take
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good
decision regarding this matter of my humble request.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ammu
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IELTS letter Recently your employer offered some employees the opportunity to work from home. write a letter to your manager requesting the same arrangement. You should say 1. why do you want to work from home? 2. Why should it be beneficial for the company and yourself? 3. Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home

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8 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
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