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a letter about replying to Croft to give information

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Dear Ms Croft I would like to thank you for your enquiry of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment. I can confirm that only the highest-quality meterials are used in all our equipment, which is reflected in our 5-year guarantee. Our prices are highly competitive, due to small profit margins, thus I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do, however, offer a 5% quantity discount off net prices on orders over €5, 000. I have pleasure in enclosing our catalogue and a price list. Please note that all prices are quoted CIF London. Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any further questions you might have. Yours sincerely Birgit Lange
Dear Ms Croft

I would like to thank you for your
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enquiry
of 14 May in which you asked about our fitness equipment.

I can confirm that
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only
the highest-quality
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meterials
are
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used
in all our equipment, which
is reflected
in our 5-year guarantee.

Our
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prices
are
highly
competitive, due to
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small
profit margins,
thus
I apologize that we cannot offer credit terms. We do,
however
, offer a 5% quantity discount off net
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
on orders over €5, 000.

I have pleasure in enclosing our
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catalogue
and a
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price
list.
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Please
note that all
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prices
are quoted
CIF London.

Once again we would like to thank you for your writing. We would welcome any
further
questions you might have.

Yours
sincerely


Birgit
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Lange
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IELTS letter a letter about replying to Croft to give information

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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