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Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job

Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job x8nKb
Hello James, I am writing to apply for the role of Assistant Librarian. I have seen the job posting in today’s newspaper. To start with my introduction first, my name is James, I am married, and father of two children. My hobbies are swimming, and listening to music, mainly old melodies. I commenced my professional career five years ago, and currently I am in the equivalent role in my current job. My responsibilities include supporting library functions, and researching about most relevant current affairs, and to bring the associated literature in form of books or magazines for the readers. Additionally, I am also engaged in a new initiative, which is bringing digital content to Library, to be par with the latest technology. The key reason, why I am looking for a change, is the distance between office and home. I need to spend around four hours in commutation, which has started impacting my family time and I also incur major travelling costs. I have seen the work address in today’s article, and I am joyful that it will be only ten minutes of journey. I do assure you, I will play a pivotal role in the profession and go beyond boundaries to ensure the right functioning. I request you to consider me, and inform me, when you want to start the interview process. Looking forward to your response. Regards, Utsav
Hello James,

I am writing to apply for the role of Assistant Librarian. I have
seen
the job posting in
today
’s newspaper.

To
start
with my introduction
first
, my name is James, I
am married
, and father of two children. My hobbies are swimming, and listening to music,
mainly
old
melodies. I commenced my professional career five years ago, and
currently
I am in the equivalent role in my
current
job. My responsibilities include supporting library functions, and researching about most relevant
current
affairs, and to bring the associated literature in form of books or magazines for the readers.
Additionally
, I am
also
engaged in a new initiative, which is bringing digital content to Library, to be par with the latest technology.

The key reason, why I am looking for a
change
, is the distance between office and home. I need to spend around four hours in commutation, which has
started
impacting my family time and I
also
incur major travelling costs. I have
seen
the work address in
today
’s article, and I am joyful that it will be
only
ten minutes of journey.

I
do assure you, I will play a pivotal role in the profession and go beyond boundaries to ensure the right functioning.
I
request you to consider me, and inform me, when you want to
start
the interview process.

Looking forward to your response.

Regards,

Utsav
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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