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You live in a room in college which you share with this arrangement and you find it difficult work.

You live in a room in college which you share with this arrangement and you find it difficult work. ORY97

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a room which I share with another student who is a student at your school. I have been living in this flat for five months and I am suffering with noisy situation which disturbs while I am doing my homework. First, my roommate is fan of rock music so she tries to play the guitar and sing song as a matter of fact I can not effort to be ready for the lessons. The second, I can not have a rest tonight therefore, she likes talking on the phone with her friends at night. However I have warned her, she did not get my completion. As a pupil of your school I am disappointed with this position. I think the best solution of this problem is changing rooms. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. Your faithfully, Marry Ray.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a room which I share with another student who is a student at your school. I have been living in this flat for five Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).months, and
months and
 I am suffering with noisy situation which disturbs while I am doing my homework. First
, my roommate is fan of rock music This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she tries to play the guitar and This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.sing-songsingsong
sing song
 as a matter of fact I The word 'effort' is a noun or an adjective. A verb is missing or misspelled, or maybe a comma is missing.
can not effort
 to be ready for the lessons. The second, I can not have a rest tonight therefore
, she likes talking on the phone with her friends at night. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I have warned her, she did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my completion. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a pupil of your school I am disappointed
 with this position. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the best solution of this problem is changing rooms. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Marry Ray. 