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You are planned studying overseas you write a letter to your friend who is a resident in that country

You are planned studying overseas you write a letter to your friend who is a resident in that country 3bqGb

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing with regard to a new product that I am arranging to produce. I would appreciate it if you could let me know about your brochure in order to create new sweets. New ingredients would be ideal if that is possible. I am particularly keen to make a business so I do hope that you will provide me with all necessary things. My reason for wanting new item is because customers' demand is increasing sharply for other types of sweatmeats. So I have decided that I would like to cancel my arrangement to your old product and purchase a new one. I would be interested to know what kind of ingredients you have and what types of packaging available to wrap. I would like to request more information about it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Ms. Ra'no.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing with regard to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 product that I am arranging to produce.

I would appreciate it if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know about your brochure in order to create You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 sweets. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 ingredients would be ideal if that is
 possible. I am particularly
 keen to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a business This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I do hope that you will provide me with all necessary things.

My reason for wanting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 item is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 customers' demand is increasing sharply
 for other types of Possible spelling mistake found.sweetmeatssweat meats
sweatmeats
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I have decided that I would like to cancel my arrangement to your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 product and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 one. I would be interested
 to know what kind of ingredients you have and what types of packaging available to wrap. I would like to request more information about it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully


Ms. Ra'no. 