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Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you. You do NOT need to write any addresses. k6a2e
Dear George, I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me and my family during our holidays in New York. We enjoyed and spent a memorable time with you and your family. I am inviting you to visit our beautiful place in India. During our stay, I think I misplaced an expensive wristwatch in the bedroom on the side table of the bed. The watch is made of Rolex, the color of the dial is black with diamonds and snake shape black leather strip. The watch may be in a transparent case. I would be appreciable it if you can please search and let me know if you find the wristwatch. You can message or call me on my cell number 9782214773. If you get it, kindly post it to our Indian postal address which I had given you during my stay. Looking forward to hearing from you. With best wishes, Deen
Dear George,

I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me and my family during our holidays in New York. We enjoyed and spent a memorable time with you and your family. I am inviting you to visit our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
place in India.

During our stay, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I misplaced an expensive wristwatch in the bedroom on the side table of the bed. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
is made
of Rolex, the color of the dial is black with diamonds and snake shape black leather strip. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
may be in a transparent case.

I would be appreciable it if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
search and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you find the wristwatch. You can message or call me on my cell number 9782214773. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it, kindly post it to our Indian postal address which I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
you during my stay.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

With best wishes,

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Deen

IELTS letter Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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