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I am writing this letter to register my lost valuables on 19th April at Beijing airport and request to apply for the claim of the lost property which was covered under your company’s travel insurance policy. My reported case ID at you call centre is RDF34749.

I am writing this letter to register my lost valuables on 19th April at Beijing airport and request to apply for the claim of the lost property which was covered under your company’s travel insurance policy. My reported case ID at you call centre is RDF34749. wBO9n
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to register my lost valuables on 19th April at Beijing airport and request to apply for the claim of the lost property which was covered under your company’s travel insurance policy. My reported case ID at your call centre is RDF34749. Unfortunately, this incident occurred, when I boarded the connecting flight from the Beijing airport on the Saturday night around local time 9: 00 pm to fly to back my home country Australia. I lost my laptop bag which had some other precious belongings, including laptop, earphones and my smart watch. During the chaos of the crowd and confusion, due to sudden changes in Jetstar airlines schedule, I lost a track to keep an account of my luggage within the waiting area. As far as, I remember, it was immediately informed to the ground staff, but it was too late. Nobody could do anything for the mishap. Therefore, I would like to put up a claim for the aforementioned items covered in travel insurance. If you want any other details regarding my flight and tickets, please do let me know. Kindly, look into the matter on urgent basis. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Shane Little
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to register my
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lost
valuables on 19th April at Beijing airport and request to apply for the claim of the
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lost
property which
was covered
under your
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company
’s travel insurance policy. My reported case ID at your call
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centre
is RDF34749.

Unfortunately, this incident occurred, when I boarded the connecting flight from the Beijing airport on the Saturday night around local time 9: 00 pm to
fly
to back my home country Australia. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
my laptop bag which had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other precious belongings, including laptop, earphones and my smart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
.

During the chaos of the crowd and confusion, due to sudden
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in Jetstar airlines schedule, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
an account of my luggage within the waiting area. As far as, I remember, it was immediately informed to the ground staff,
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but
it was too late. Nobody could do anything for the mishap.

Therefore
, I would like to put up a claim for the aforementioned items covered in travel insurance. If you want any other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
regarding my flight and tickets,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know. Kindly, look into the matter on urgent basis.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shane
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Little

IELTS letter I am writing this letter to register my lost valuables on 19th April at Beijing airport and request to apply for the claim of the lost property which was covered under your company’s travel insurance policy. My reported case ID at you call centre is RDF34749.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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