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complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

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Dear Rajesh, Flat A 103, ABCD Appt Vadodara Subject: Noise from flat A-104. I have received your note on the recent issues regarding excessive noise faced by you in our neighborhood. I had submitted a detailed note and action plan to our society regarding recent restructuring of my house last week. The major structural work regarding dimensioning of tiles have been in progress over last 2 days. It seems society office bearers missed to share the copy to you. I sincerely apologize for this inadvertent mistake at my end, as I should have been taking the lead in sharing this with you as well. I have asked the contractor to finish rest of cutting and shredding work in our common compound area, so that noise doesnt come to you. This will reduce the impact noise severity to a large extent. Also, I want to assure you that ths is not the standard that I keep for myself and hence request you to treat this issue in isolation. I deeply value your association and would like to invite you over to cup of coffee once you find it convenient. Thanking you in advance. Sincerely, Berlin Flat A 104
Dear Rajesh,

Flat A 103,
ABCD
Appt


Vadodara

Subject:
Noise
from flat A-104.

I have received your note on the recent issues regarding excessive
noise
faced by you in our neighborhood.

I had submitted a detailed note and action plan to our society regarding recent restructuring of my
house
last week. The major structural work regarding dimensioning of tiles have been in progress over last 2 days.

It seems society office bearers
missed to share
the copy to you. I
sincerely
apologize for this inadvertent mistake at my
end
, as I should have been taking the lead in sharing this with you
as well
.

I have asked the contractor to finish rest of cutting and shredding work in our common compound area,
so
that
noise
doesnt
come
to you. This will
reduce
the impact
noise
severity to a large extent.

Also
, I want to assure you that
ths
is not the standard that I
keep
for myself and
hence
request you to treat this issue in isolation. I
deeply
value your association and would like to invite you over to cup of coffee once you find it convenient.

Thanking you in advance.

Sincerely
,

Berlin

Flat A 104
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IELTS letter complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

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  American English
13 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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