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write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a house/flat you would like to live in

write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a house/flat you would like to live in peRgm
Currently, I’m living in a small house in my village. But in the future, I would like to move to another house, or I can call it my dream house. It will be a modern two-story house by a peaceful seaside. I will paint it yellow, which is my favorite color, and the ceiling will be beautifully decorated with colorful ornaments. I love natural lights rather than artificial lights so each room will have its windows. Outside the house, there will be a large garden with different kinds of flowers and a lovely doghouse for my poodle. One special thing I would like my house to have is that all doors will be automatic doors, which means they will open automatically when recognizing the approach of people. Though my dream house might cost much, especially because it will be in a coastal area, I think it is worth it.
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, I’m living in a
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in my village.
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But
in the future, I would like to
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move
to another
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house
, or I can call it my dream
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house
. It will be a modern two-story
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house
by a peaceful seaside. I will paint it yellow, which is my favorite color, and the ceiling will be
beautifully
decorated with colorful ornaments. I
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love
natural lights
rather
than artificial lights
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so
each room will have its windows. Outside the
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house
, there will be a large garden with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kinds of flowers and a lovely doghouse for my poodle. One special thing I would like my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
to have is that all doors will be automatic doors, which means they will open
automatically
when recognizing the approach of
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people
. Though my dream
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house
might cost much,
especially
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because
it will be in a coastal area, I
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think
it is worth it.
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IELTS letter write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a house/flat you would like to live in

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1 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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