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You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application

You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application X7nEr
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of an assistant in the King hotel which was advertised in the Daily newspaper last week. The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a great deal. I feel I am the right person for the post because my qualifications and experiences are extremely appropriate. I am 20 years old and currently a junior at Danang University of Foreign Languages. My major is English and I have IELTS 8. 0, besides I also took a Chinese course, so I am confident that I can speak more than one foreign language. In addition, when I was in high school, I worked as a part-time receptionist for a local restaurant. My core strength is teamwork skills. You will find me to be a positive, motivated and responsible person who is keen to learn and contribute. Given the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I get the job done accurately and efficiently. I have enclosed a copy of my C. V I look forward to receiving your response in the near future. Yours faithfully, Tran Thi Diem Quynh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of an assistant in the King hotel which
was advertised
in the Daily newspaper last week. The particular
skills
and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a great deal. I feel I am the right person for the post
because
my qualifications and experiences are
extremely
appropriate.

I am 20 years
old
and
currently
a junior at
Danang
University of Foreign Languages. My major is English and I have IELTS 8. 0,
besides
I
also
took a Chinese course,
so
I am confident that I can speak more than one foreign language.

In addition
, when I was in high school, I worked as a part-time receptionist for a local restaurant.

My core strength is teamwork
skills
. You will find me to be a
positive
, motivated and responsible person who is keen to learn and contribute.
Given
the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I
get
the job done
accurately
and
efficiently
.

I have enclosed a copy of my C. V

I look forward to receiving your response in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tran
Thi
Diem
Quynh
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IELTS letter You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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