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You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application

You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application X7nEr
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of an assistant in the King hotel which was advertised in the Daily newspaper last week. The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a great deal. I feel I am the right person for the post because my qualifications and experiences are extremely appropriate. I am 20 years old and currently a junior at Danang University of Foreign Languages. My major is English and I have IELTS 8. 0, besides I also took a Chinese course, so I am confident that I can speak more than one foreign language. In addition, when I was in high school, I worked as a part-time receptionist for a local restaurant. My core strength is teamwork skills. You will find me to be a positive, motivated and responsible person who is keen to learn and contribute. Given the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I get the job done accurately and efficiently. I have enclosed a copy of my C. V I look forward to receiving your response in the near future. Yours faithfully, Tran Thi Diem Quynh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of an assistant in the King hotel which
was advertised
in the Daily newspaper last week. The particular
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skills
and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a great deal. I feel I am the right person for the post
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because
my qualifications and experiences are
extremely
appropriate.

I am 20 years
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old
and
currently
a junior at
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Danang
University of Foreign Languages. My major is English and I have IELTS 8. 0,
besides
I
also
took a Chinese course,
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so
I am confident that I can speak more than one foreign language.

In addition
, when I was in high school, I worked as a part-time receptionist for a local restaurant.

My core strength is teamwork
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skills
. You will find me to be a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
, motivated and responsible person who is keen to learn and contribute.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the job done
accurately
and
efficiently
.

I have enclosed a copy of my C. V

I look forward to receiving your response in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tran
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Thi
Diem
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Quynh
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Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
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IELTS letter You decide to apply for the following jobs which you see advertised in a student newspaper. Write the letter of application

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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