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You have recently made a purchase from your department store. However, when you arrived home you found a fault with it.Write a letter to the manager

You have recently made a purchase from your department store. However, when you arrived home you found a fault with it. Write a letter to the manager xxdqg
Dear Mrs Smith I am writing to complain about a black coat I purchased from your shop last week. Although the coat was supposed to be completely woolen, I got soaked the first time I wore it in cold weather. Furthermore when I arrived to he coat off, it was not my size it was too s and not suitable for me. That was not as like as the real coat when I chose. I sent the jacket back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would be sent a refund. However, I still have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way. I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention.
Dear Mrs Smith

I am writing to complain about a black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from your shop last week.

Although the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
was supposed
to be completely woolen, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
soaked the
first
time I wore it in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
weather.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Furthermore
when I arrived to
Did you mean "the"?
he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
off, it was not my size it was too s and not suitable for me. That was not as like as the real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coat
when I chose. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
the jacket back to your shop after having
been assured
by one of the assistants that I would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
a refund.

However
, I
still
have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way. I have
been treated
and hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention.
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IELTS letter You have recently made a purchase from your department store. However, when you arrived home you found a fault with it. Write a letter to the manager

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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