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You have recently made a purchase from your department store. However, when you arrived home you found a fault with it.Write a letter to the manager

You have recently made a purchase from your department store. However, when you arrived home you found a fault with it. Write a letter to the manager xxdqg

Dear Mrs Smith I am writing to complain about a black coat I purchased from your shop last week. Although the coat was supposed to be completely woolen, I got soaked the first time I wore it in cold weather. Furthermore when I arrived to he coat off, it was not my size it was too s and not suitable for me. That was not as like as the real coat when I chose. I sent the jacket back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would be sent a refund. However, I still have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way. I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention.

Dear Mrs Smith

I am writing to complain about a black You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleatherwoolfurskin
coat
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your shop last week.

Although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleatherwoolfurskin
coat
was supposed
 to be completely woolen, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 soaked the first
 time I wore it in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 weather.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
 when I arrived to Did you mean "the"?the
he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleatherwoolfurskin
coat
 off, it was not my size it was too s and not suitable for me. That was not as like as the real You use this word too often, consider replacing it withleatherwoolfurskin
coat
 when I chose. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 the jacket back to your shop after having been assured
 by one of the assistants that I would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 a refund.

However
, I still
 have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way. I have been treated
 and hope that steps will be taken
 to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. 