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Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local e5AoB
Dear John, I am so surprised to hear that you have been living in Kyrgyzstan since last December. I hope you find our city is good for living and working, because Bishkek is quite a green city. I remember that you had an allergy for some dust and in Bishkek the level of the dust is very low. Also, you would be an ideal candidate as a tutor in our National University with a huge number of Language Faculties because of your perfect English. On the other side, you could find a lovely job by local head hunters through their web pages. Do you still like fishing? I am asking that because we had an original fishing club, where you could find a few fans of fishing. I would appreciate it if you could find some like-minded in your hobbies and discover new places for your fishing. Please do not hesitate to contact me in case of any questions, With warm wishes, Suzann
Dear John,

I am
so
surprised to hear that you have been living in Kyrgyzstan since last December. I hope you
find
our city is
good
for living and working,
because
Bishkek is quite a green city.
I
remember that you had an allergy for
some
dust and in Bishkek the level of the dust is
very
low.

Also
, you would be an ideal candidate as a tutor in our National University with a huge number of Language Faculties
because
of your perfect English. On the other side, you could
find
a lovely job by local head hunters through their web pages.

Do you
still
like fishing? I am asking that
because
we had an original fishing club, where you could
find
a few fans of fishing. I would appreciate it if you could
find
some
like-minded in your hobbies and discover new places for your fishing.

Please
do not hesitate to contact me in case of any questions,

With warm wishes,

Suzann
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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