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Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local e5AoB

Dear John, I am so surprised to hear that you have been living in Kyrgyzstan since last December. I hope you find our city is good for living and working, because Bishkek is quite a green city. I remember that you had an allergy for some dust and in Bishkek the level of the dust is very low. Also, you would be an ideal candidate as a tutor in our National University with a huge number of Language Faculties because of your perfect English. On the other side, you could find a lovely job by local head hunters through their web pages. Do you still like fishing? I am asking that because we had an original fishing club, where you could find a few fans of fishing. I would appreciate it if you could find some like-minded in your hobbies and discover new places for your fishing. Please do not hesitate to contact me in case of any questions, With warm wishes, Suzann

Dear John,

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 surprised to hear that you have been living in Kyrgyzstan since last December. I hope you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasure trove
find
 our city is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for living and working, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Bishkek is quite a green city. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 remember that you had an allergy for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 dust and in Bishkek the level of the dust is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 low.

Also
, you would be an ideal candidate as a tutor in our National University with a huge number of Language Faculties This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of your perfect English. On the other side, you could You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasure trove
find
 a lovely job by local head hunters through their web pages.

Do you still
 like fishing? I am asking that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we had an original fishing club, where you could You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasure trove
find
 a few fans of fishing. I would appreciate it if you could You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtreasure trove
find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 like-minded in your hobbies and discover new places for your fishing.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do not hesitate to contact me in case of any questions,

With warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.Suzanne
Suzann

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

162 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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