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Visiting a friend whom you have not spoken to since quite long

Visiting a friend whom you have not spoken to since quite long PVRYE
Dear Anna, How are you? It has been quite long since we have met or spoken to each other. I remember the last time we spoke to each other was couple of years before when you had moved from New York to California after getting married. How has the city been treating you. I am sure you must have been well-settled with your family. After we spoke, I was struggling to switch my job. Luckily, I got a job in Microsoft and I too moved to Seattle an year ago. Life since then has been very hectic. An new city, different surroundings, different culture. It took me sometime to get adapted to this city. Now I am in love with this city. I did solo travelling to some beautiful places in and around Seattle. I do miss home and my parents. Luckily I found some good roommates and very friendly peersin office. It isbeacuse of them I never have felt that void which I always feared of having on living away from my parents. Microsoft has given me great opportunities and one of them is the schlorship to pursue my dream of withholding a Doctorate Degree in the field of Data analytics. To chase of dream, I am travelling to Califonia in a couple of months. I am travelling as of now just to make some arrangements for starting a living in California. My todo list is too long. The priority being finding a accomodation that is in near proximity to my University. This might just take a few days. But since I am travelling to California, I thought of meeting you and spending some time with you. Lets relive our old days when we used to be travel buddies. I am planning to visit some places near California. I am very excited to meet you. Hope to see you soon. Best wishes Clara
Dear Anna,

How are you? It has been quite long since we have met or spoken to each other. I remember the last time we spoke to each other was couple of years
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before
when you had
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moved
from New York to California after getting married. How has the city been treating you. I am sure you
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must
have been well-settled with your family.

After we spoke, I was struggling to switch my job. Luckily, I
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got
a job in Microsoft and I too
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moved
to Seattle
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an
year ago. Life since then has been
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very
hectic.
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An
new city,
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different
surroundings,
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culture. It took me sometime to
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get
adapted to this city.
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Now
I am in
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love
with this city. I did solo
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travelling
to
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some
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beautiful
places in and around Seattle. I do miss home and my parents. Luckily I found
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some
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good
roommates and
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very
friendly
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peersin
office. It
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isbeacuse
of them I never have felt that void which I always feared of having on living away from my parents.

Microsoft has
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me great opportunities and one of them is the
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schlorship
to pursue my dream of withholding a Doctorate Degree in the field of Data analytics. To chase of dream, I am
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travelling
to
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Califonia
in a couple of months.

I am
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as of
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now
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just
to
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make
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some
arrangements for starting a living in California. My
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todo
list is too long. The priority being finding
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a
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accomodation
that is
in near proximity to my University. This might
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take a few days.
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since I am
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to California, I
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thought
of meeting you and spending
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some
time with you.

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relive our
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old
days when we
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used
to be travel buddies. I am planning to visit
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some
places near California.

I am
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very
excited to
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meet
you.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

Best wishes

Clara
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IELTS letter Visiting a friend whom you have not spoken to since quite long

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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