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letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation

letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation LbOaR
I have seen your advertisement requesting volunteers for joining a conservation expedition to a remote region of Costa Rica that I am fascinated to take part in as a member by this safari. Although I do not have a fit body shape, I am good at swimming with lots of skillful ability and be better at breaking my record swimming. I consider myself to be a kind volunteer of the team and am also adventurous and zealous. I have two queries about the expedition. Firstly, it is hard for me to get clear which animals I will be researching as there are massive kinds from rainforest to coast. Secondly, could you give me more information about the place and time for training Spanish since I just knew several words and am not confident to communicate with local people. Would I be capable of coping with this expedition? I would be grateful if you could handle these queries as soon as possible. Thank you Chi
I have
seen
your advertisement requesting volunteers for joining a conservation expedition to a remote region of Costa Rica that I
am fascinated
to
take part
in as a member by this safari. Although I do not have a fit body shape, I am
good
at swimming with lots of skillful ability and be better at breaking my record swimming. I consider myself to be a kind volunteer of the team and am
also
adventurous and zealous.

I have two queries about the expedition.
Firstly
, it is
hard
for me to
get
clear
which animals I will be researching as there are massive kinds from rainforest to coast.
Secondly
, could you give me more information about the place and time for training Spanish since I
just
knew
several words and am not confident to communicate with local
people
. Would I be capable of coping with this expedition?

I would be grateful if you could handle these queries as
soon
as possible.

Thank you

Chi
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IELTS letter letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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