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letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation

letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation LbOaR

I have seen your advertisement requesting volunteers for joining a conservation expedition to a remote region of Costa Rica that I am fascinated to take part in as a member by this safari. Although I do not have a fit body shape, I am good at swimming with lots of skillful ability and be better at breaking my record swimming. I consider myself to be a kind volunteer of the team and am also adventurous and zealous. I have two queries about the expedition. Firstly, it is hard for me to get clear which animals I will be researching as there are massive kinds from rainforest to coast. Secondly, could you give me more information about the place and time for training Spanish since I just knew several words and am not confident to communicate with local people. Would I be capable of coping with this expedition? I would be grateful if you could handle these queries as soon as possible. Thank you Chi

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 your advertisement requesting volunteers for joining a conservation expedition to a remote region of Costa Rica that I am fascinated
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in as a member by this safari. Although I do not have a fit body shape, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at swimming with lots of skillful ability and be better at breaking my record swimming. I consider myself to be a kind volunteer of the team and am also
 adventurous and zealous.

I have two queries about the expedition. Firstly
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 which animals I will be researching as there are massive kinds from rainforest to coast. Secondly
, could you give me more information about the place and time for training Spanish since I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Did you mean "new"?new
knew
 several words and am not confident to communicate with local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Would I be capable of coping with this expedition?

I would be grateful if you could handle these queries as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Thank you

Chi

IELTS letter letter for requesting volunteer to join a conservation

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

163 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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