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query related to local accommodation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter regarding a query related to local accommodation in London as I will be staying there for a temporary job for about 3 months from 1st September to 30th November. I am looking for a studio apartment or a homestay with a family in the city centre for me to commute to office comfortably and visit nearby tourist places. For a homestay, I would prefer to have a separate bathroom and the place should be quite as I am studying also. In addition to the above, I am looking for a place with 24-hours broadband connection as I work on my assignments related to office and courses in my free time. Also, the stay should be in proximity to local market for me to purchase regular household items such as bread or milk. If you find anything suitable as per my requirements, please contact me on my mobile number 08453212233. I would look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding a query related to local accommodation in London as I will be staying there for a temporary job for about 3 months from 1st September to 30th November.

I am looking for a studio apartment or a homestay with a family in the city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
for me to commute to office
comfortably
and visit nearby tourist places. For a homestay, I would prefer to have a separate bathroom and the place should be quite as I am studying
also
.

In addition
to the above, I am looking for a place with 24-hours broadband connection as I work on my assignments related to office and courses in my free time.
Also
, the stay should be in proximity to local market for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
regular household items such as bread or milk.

If you find anything suitable as per my requirements,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact me on my mobile number 08453212233.

I would look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter query related to local accommodation

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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