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There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should:  Describe the event  Explain why you think he/she would be interested in it  Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her

There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should:  Describe the event  Explain why you think he/she would be interested in it  Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her pRR5L
Dear Aman, I hope you must be in pink health and high of the spirits. It has been a long time since I write you. Actually I was busy in family stuff. Hey, I have a good news for you. A renowned charitable trust in my locality is going to organise a “Traditional dance competition” at state level and prizes are also very attractive. Every year a charitable trust names “ We Together” organise this competition in which abundance of participants takes part. The sole intention is just to aware folks about the traditional dance forms and raise funds for charity. I know very well, how much you always were interested in such events and the prizes you won. Therefore I decided to put this in your notice. Moreover, the winners will get chance to meet a famous celebrity and the amazing fact is that the celebrity is none other than your favourite actor John Abrahim. This event lasts from 1April to 10th April and for rest of the details you can check on the trust’s official website www. wetogether. in. Due to hectic schedule, I can only attend this on last day, but I assure you that later on we will go for dinner together. I hope you will participate and my best wishes are with you. Lovingly, Vikas
Dear
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Aman
,

I hope you
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must
be in pink health and high of the spirits. It has been a long time since I write you. Actually I was busy in family stuff. Hey, I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news for you. A renowned charitable trust in my locality is going to
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organise
a “Traditional dance competition” at state level and prizes are
also
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very
attractive.

Every year a charitable trust names
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“
We Together”
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organise
this competition in which abundance of participants
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takes part
. The sole intention is
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just
to aware folks about the traditional dance forms and raise funds for charity.

I know
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very
well, how much you always
were interested
in such
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events
and the prizes you won.
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Therefore
I decided to put this in your notice.
Moreover
, the winners will
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get
chance to
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meet
a
Consider using "celebrity".
famous celebrity
and the amazing fact is that the celebrity is none other than your
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favourite
actor John
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Abrahim
.

This
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event
lasts from 1April to 10th April and for rest of the
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details
you can
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check
on the trust’s official website
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www
.
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wetogether
.
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in
.

Due to hectic schedule, I can
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only
attend this on last day,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I assure you that later on we will go for dinner together.

I hope you will participate and my best wishes are with you.

Lovingly
,

Vikas

IELTS letter There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should:  Describe the event  Explain why you think he/she would be interested in it  Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her

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  American English
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219 words
6.0
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