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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do Nq2m

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a complaint that was filed on 24th april 2012, against the bus service. I am writing this letter once again, in strong terms to express my dissatisfication with bus service that is being provided in area 51. The bus in this route has several service related problems. Firstly, the arrival of the bus in the morning is always late. Followed by that, the driver is inexperienced and the journey seems to be little slow. This bus connects area 51 and area 58, which has school, college and office going people in the peak time. Due to the delay in the bus, I reach office late, and I have been warned by the manager and further delays will result in loss of pay. The slow journey is affecting my mental health and my day becomes bad. The people of area 514 would be grateful if you could change the bus and the driver. I would appericiate that if you could look into the matter at your earliest and take action the soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Jack

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to a complaint that was filed
 on 24th Possible spelling mistake found.AprilAPRIAprils
april
 2012, against the bus service. I am writing this letter once again, in strong terms to express my Possible spelling mistake found.dissatisfaction
dissatisfication
 with bus service that is
being provided
 in The word 'area 51' is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.Area 51
area 51
. The bus in this route has several service related problems.

Firstly
, the arrival of the bus in the morning is always late. Followed by that, the driver is inexperienced
 and the journey seems to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 slow. This bus connects The word 'area 51' is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.Area 51
area 51
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 58, which has school, college and office going This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the peak time.

Due to the delay in the bus, I reach office late, and I have been warned
 by the manager and further
 delays will result in loss of pay. The slow journey is affecting my mental health and my day becomes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 514 would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the bus and the driver. I would Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
appericiate
 that if you could look into the matter at your earliest and take action the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours Faithfully
,

Jack