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complain tenant at the apartment in front of me

complain tenant at the apartment in front of me 9ARn
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my irritation about receiving a wrong delivery today in the morning. I have ordered from your online website store a t-shirt that was extremely fascinating as I liked the design and the color of the product, and I also trust your clothing materials so I was not hesitated to order the product immediately. Although I received the product on time as mentioned on your online portal, the size and color of the t-shirt were wrong. I was dissapointed to getting a wrong size as I requested large size but I received a small size which does not fit me. Moreover, the color of the t-shirt was blue instead of having a brown color one. I felt bad once the order was delivered and I decided not to deal with your online store again even I know that you are a trustworthy company but I had a bad experience with you. I would like to request you to send me the correct size and color besides sending a complimentary gift as it will be a nice sign of being a top branded store or else I would ask for a full refund of money which will be my last option. I await your prompt response. Yours sincerly, Paula Raafat
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to express my irritation about receiving a
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wrong
delivery
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today
in the morning. I have ordered from your online website store a t-shirt that was
extremely
fascinating as I liked the design and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
color
of the product, and I
also
trust your clothing materials
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so
I was not hesitated to order the product immediately. Although I received the product on time as mentioned on your online portal, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
size
and
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color
of the t-shirt were
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wrong
.

I was
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dissapointed
to getting a
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wrong
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size
as I requested large
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size
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but
I received a
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small
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size
which does not fit me.
Moreover
, the
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color
of the t-shirt was blue
instead
of having a brown
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color
one. I felt
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bad
once the order
was delivered
and I decided not to deal with your online store again even I know that you are a trustworthy
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company
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but
I had a
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bad
experience with you.

I would like to request you to
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send
me the correct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
size
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
color
besides
sending a complimentary gift as it will be a nice
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sign
of being a
Make sure that the adjective 'top' is correct. Possibly, it should be an adverb (typically ~ly) that modifies 'branded'. Possibly, it should be the first word in a compound adjective (hyphenated adjective). Possibly, it is correct.
top branded
store or else I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
a full refund of money which will be my last option.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
await your prompt response.

Yours
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sincerly
,

Paula
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Raafat

IELTS letter complain tenant at the apartment in front of me

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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