Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News:"The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wi

The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News: " The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wi e5wDO
In the letter to the editor, the author concludes that the West Lansburg Council should not allow the roads to be built along the coastal wetlands. As it can be seen that the tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of the West Lansburg, it is very important that the area is protected and reserved. The author bases his conclusion by comparing results with Neighboring Eastern Carpenteria, which had a similar sanctuary. However, the sanctuary status was repealed in 1978 due to which constructions were allowed, which in turn harmed the aquatic life of the sea. Hence, the author thinks that the same would result in West Lansburg and hence, doesn’t want the road to be built. It is very important that the condition of Neighboring Eastern Carpenteria must be examined before jumping to conclusions. The author must not be aware of a number of other reasons for the depletion of aquatic life in that area. Firstly, the author assumes that decrease of the population of the sea was because of the repeal of its sanctuary status. The author nowhere mentions that the new status involves building of roads which would actually affect the wildlife. Secondly, the author doesn’t find out the actual reasons for the reducing number of the groundhog. As it is mentioned that the number was once in millions, it is very important to find out the actual reason behind the falling figures. Measures must be taken with respect to the actual reasons of the falling numbers. Also, the author nowhere mentions that how the construction of the road along the coastline would affect the groundhog. As long as the construction of the roads doesn’t harm its natural habitat and the coastline is not destroyed by its construction, it would be good enough to construct roads. Hence, it is necessary for the author to gets the fact right before concluding the entire discussion on general information.
In the letter to the editor, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
concludes that the West
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lansburg
Council should not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
to
be built
along the coastal wetlands. As it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the tufted groundhog
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in the coastal wetlands of the West
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lansburg
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that the area
is protected
and reserved.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
bases his conclusion by comparing results with Neighboring Eastern
Possible spelling mistake found.
Carpenteria
, which had a similar sanctuary.
However
, the sanctuary status
was repealed
in 1978 due to which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
constructions
were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
, which in turn harmed the aquatic life of the sea.
Hence
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that the same would result in West
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lansburg
and
hence
, doesn’t want the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
to
be built
. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that the condition of Neighboring Eastern
Possible spelling mistake found.
Carpenteria
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be examined
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
jumping to conclusions. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
not be aware of a number of other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
for the depletion of aquatic life in that area.

Firstly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
assumes that decrease of the population of the sea was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the repeal of its sanctuary status. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
nowhere mentions that the new status involves building of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
which would actually affect the wildlife.

Secondly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
doesn’t find out the actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
for the reducing number of the groundhog. As it
is mentioned
that the number was once in millions, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to find out the actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
behind the falling figures. Measures
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be taken
with respect to the actual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
of the falling numbers.

Also
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
nowhere mentions that how the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
construction
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
along the coastline would affect the groundhog. As long as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
construction
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
doesn’t harm its natural habitat and the coastline is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
by its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
construction
, it would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to construct roads.

Hence
, it is necessary for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
author
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
the fact right
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
concluding the entire discussion on general information.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News: " The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wi

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News:"The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wi