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Someone returned to you a bag that you lost with all its belongings still inside it. Write a letter to thank the person: Thank the person Explain how you lost it Explain why its belongings were so important

Someone returned to you a bag that you lost with all its belongings still inside it. Write a letter to thank the person: Thank the person Explain how you lost it Explain why its belongings were so important 9rQDn
Dear Mr. James, I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you for returning my lost bag with its contents intact. Last week, July 7, I went to the Rose Garden restaurant to have my lauch and I kept my bag beneath the table, however, while I was eating, I received an emergency call which made me to leave in a hurry, as a consequence, I forgot my bad in the process. In the bag are various important items such as my laptop, international passport, visa, cheque books and credit cards. I would be making a presentation in New York next week Tuesday and if you had not returned it, I will be unable to travel for the seminar, as a result, I will not participate in the workshop. Also, with the increasing rate of internet crime, my account may have been compromised if my cheque books and ATM cards had ended up in the wrong hands. Once again, I want to thank you for your good deed, I would be rewarding you immensely when I return from my trip. Yours sincerely, Jerry Jude.
Dear Mr. James,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you for returning my lost bag with its contents intact.

Last week, July 7, I went to the Rose Garden restaurant to have my
lauch
and I
kept
my bag beneath the table,
however
, while I was eating, I received an emergency call which made me to
leave
in a hurry, as a consequence, I forgot my
bad
in the process.

In the bag are various
important
items such as my laptop, international passport, visa,
cheque
books and credit cards. I would be making a presentation in New York
next
week Tuesday and if you had not returned it, I will be unable to travel for the seminar,
as a result
, I will not participate in the workshop.
Also
, with the increasing rate of internet crime, my account may have
been compromised
if my
cheque
books and ATM cards had ended up in the
wrong
hands.

Once again, I want to thank you for your
good
deed, I would be rewarding you
immensely
when I return from my trip.

Yours
sincerely
,

Jerry Jude.
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IELTS letter Someone returned to you a bag that you lost with all its belongings still inside it. Write a letter to thank the person: Thank the person Explain how you lost it Explain why its belongings were so important

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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