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Hello Ronaldo, How are you brother? We haven’t met with each other since you went to the UK to follow your dream like a journalist. By the way, I heard about that you are helping in a journalism workshop. So, I have a good new to tell you. That is about a person I know to interview with you. She is one of my best friends who wants to participate in workshop. Her name is Selena. She has a good smile that everyone can notice. Her skin is naturally brown. She is a patient, handsome woman, with very white teeth and open honest eyes. Her hair is always near and tidy. Everyday she wears like normal clothes that is T-shirt and trousers. She lives with her family. She has four family members: father, mother, grandmother and her. Her father is a government clerk but her mother is a good mistress. Her grandmother is retired from the work since she was sixty. They all are very good at each of their part. I think you want to know more details about them because they are passing through of their lives. Thus, if you want to know, you can reply and contact me. As you know, my friend is also exciting to meet with you. That’s why when you see my email, reply me. So, see you later brother. I am sure that you are busy with your jobs. I don’t want to pester anymore. Yours Camila

Hello Ronaldo,

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Yours

Camila