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Hello Ronaldo, How are you brother? We haven’t met with each other since you went to the UK to follow your dream like a journalist. By the way, I heard about that you are helping in a journalism workshop. So, I have a good new to tell you. That is about a person I know to interview with you. She is one of my best friends who wants to participate in workshop. Her name is Selena. She has a good smile that everyone can notice. Her skin is naturally brown. She is a patient, handsome woman, with very white teeth and open honest eyes. Her hair is always near and tidy. Everyday she wears like normal clothes that is T-shirt and trousers. She lives with her family. She has four family members: father, mother, grandmother and her. Her father is a government clerk but her mother is a good mistress. Her grandmother is retired from the work since she was sixty. They all are very good at each of their part. I think you want to know more details about them because they are passing through of their lives. Thus, if you want to know, you can reply and contact me. As you know, my friend is also exciting to meet with you. That’s why when you see my email, reply me. So, see you later brother. I am sure that you are busy with your jobs. I don’t want to pester anymore. Yours Camila
Hello Ronaldo,

How are you brother? We haven’t met with each other since you went to the UK to follow your dream like a journalist. By the way, I heard about that you are helping in a journalism workshop.
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about a person I
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to interview with you. She is one of my best friends who
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wants
to participate in workshop. Her name is Selena. She has a
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good
smile that everyone can notice. Her skin is
naturally
brown. She is a patient, handsome woman, with
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very
white teeth and open honest eyes. Her hair is always near and tidy.
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Everyday she
wears like normal clothes
that is
T-shirt and trousers. She
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lives
with her family. She has four family members: father, mother, grandmother and her. Her father is a
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government
clerk
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but
her mother is a
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good
mistress. Her grandmother
is retired
from the work since she was sixty. They all are
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very
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good
at each of their part. I
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you
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to
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more
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details
about them
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because
they are passing through of their
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lives
.
Thus
, if you
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want
to
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know
, you can reply and contact me. As you
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know
, my friend is
also
exciting to
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meet
with you. That’s why when you
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see
my email, reply me.
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So
,
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see
you later brother. I am sure that you are busy with your jobs. I don’t
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want
to pester anymore.

Yours

Camila
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3 paragraphs
244 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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