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ou are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has just opened near my University residence. Although I am pleased that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open up to midnight each night, and as a result there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of motorbikes continuing until about 12. 30 each night. This causes me and my neighbours in the residence a serious problem, because at that time we are either trying to sleep, or in some cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise and commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a very worrying situation for us all. I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend. I propose that we also put up some signs reminding users to be considerate and to keep their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple steps which would make us all very grateful indeed. Thank you for your attention to this important matter. Kind Regards, Claudia Maggioni
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing regarding the amount of noise coming from the new canteen which has
just
opened near my University residence. Although I am
pleased
that we have this facility, the restaurant remains open up to midnight each night, and
as a result
there is considerable talking, shouting and the sound of motorbikes continuing until about 12. 30 each night.

This causes me and my
neighbours
in the residence a serious problem,
because
at that time we are either trying to sleep, or in
some
cases trying to study in our bedrooms. In both cases, the noise and commotion disturbs us, making us tired in the mornings or affecting the progress of our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a
very
worrying situation for us all.

I would like to suggest that the campus authorities restrict the canteen’s opening to 11pm at the latest on weekdays, leaving it at midnight during the weekend.
I
propose that we
also
put up
some
signs reminding users to be considerate and to
keep
their noise to an absolute minimum. These are simple steps which would
make
us all
very
grateful
indeed
.

Thank you for your attention to this
important
matter. Kind Regards,

Claudia
Maggioni
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IELTS letter ou are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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