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One of the best solutions to the growing environmental pollution is to increase the fuel prices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the best solutions to the growing environmental pollution is to increase the fuel prices. Wy8Jb
Hiking petroleum prices are considered to be the most suitable remedial measure for growing environmental pollution. I disagree with this statement and consider that although, an increase in the asking petroleum prices may have some impact on environmental pollution, other solutions like zero emission vehicles and encouraging public transportation are of vital importance. It seems reasonable to think that an increase in the fuel price will presumably cut down the atmospheric pollution which is increasing by leaps and bounds. As the fuel prices will rise, it will discourage people from using their personal vehicles. Thus, lesser cars on the roads will decrease their harmful gaseous emissions, which are deemed to be one of the main reasons for the environmental pollution. Certainly, this solution would help in reducing the air pollution but it is limited because it will make all transport expensive including the public transports. Moreover, the increased transportation charges will make the prices of other commodities go up and result in inflation. As a result, the money saved through increasing the petroleum prices would be consumed, many times over, in giving rebates. One of the most effective remedy in combating the atmospheric pollution would be to introduce electric cars that have zero emissions. Since these cars run on electricity rather than consuming fossil fuels, they do not emit toxic fumes or smoke particles that result in air pollution. For example, Tesla car is an electric vehicle that is much popular in the developed world. This will not only bring instant results, but would also prove to be a more durable solution. There is, however, a need that governments in the developing countries should encourage these industries by giving subsidies and tax relaxations. Another important measure to the growing atmospheric pollution is to make public transport more viable. By making these facilities more attractive and user friendly, the public can be prevented from using their own vehicles. This will indirectly lower the number of vehicles on the roads that would result in the lesser smoke and harmful gases being released into the atmosphere. Furthermore, constructing projects like underground trams and cross city electric rails will also help in combating the air pollution in the long run. In conclusion, I believe that an increase in the petrol price is a limited solution to the growing environmental pollution. This problem can be addressed more efficiently by increasing the use of the electric cars and by promoting the public transport.
Hiking petroleum
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prices
are considered
to be the most suitable remedial measure for growing
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environmental
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pollution
. I disagree with this statement and consider that although, an increase in the asking petroleum
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prices
may have
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some
impact on
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environmental
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pollution
, other
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solutions
like zero emission
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vehicles
and encouraging
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public
transportation are of vital importance.

It seems reasonable to
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think
that an increase in the fuel
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price
will presumably
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cut
down the atmospheric
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pollution
which is increasing by leaps and bounds. As the fuel
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prices
will rise, it will discourage
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people
from using their personal
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vehicles
.
Thus
, lesser
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cars
on the roads will decrease their harmful gaseous emissions, which
are deemed
to be one of the main reasons for the
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environmental
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pollution
.
Certainly
, this
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solution
would
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help
in reducing the air
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pollution
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but
it
is limited
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because
it will
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make
all
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transport
expensive including the
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public
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transports
.
Moreover
, the increased transportation charges will
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make
the
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prices
of other commodities go up and
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result
in inflation. As a
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result
, the money saved through increasing the petroleum
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prices
would
be consumed
,
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many
times over, in giving rebates.

One of the most effective remedy in combating the atmospheric
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pollution
would be to introduce
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electric
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cars
that have zero emissions. Since these
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cars
run on electricity
rather
than consuming fossil fuels, they do not emit toxic fumes or smoke particles that
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result
in air
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pollution
.
For example
, Tesla
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car
is an
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electric
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vehicle
that is
much popular in the developed world. This will not
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only
bring instant
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results
,
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but
would
also
prove to be a more durable
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solution
. There is,
however
, a need that
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governments
in the
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developing countries
should encourage these industries by giving subsidies and tax relaxations.

Another
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important
measure to the growing atmospheric
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pollution
is to
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make
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public
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transport
more viable. By making these facilities more attractive and
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user friendly
, the
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public
can be
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prevented
from using their
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own
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vehicles
. This will
indirectly
lower the number of
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vehicles
on the roads that would
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result
in the lesser smoke and harmful gases
being released
into the atmosphere.
Furthermore
, constructing projects like underground trams and cross city
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electric
rails will
also
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help
in combating the air
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pollution
in the long run.

In conclusion
, I believe that an increase in the petrol
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price
is a limited
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solution
to the growing
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environmental
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pollution
. This problem can
be addressed
more
efficiently
by increasing the
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use
of the
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electric
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cars
and by promoting the
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public
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transport
.
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