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you arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend, explain the important event, apologize for the situation, suggest a new arrangement.

you arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend, explain the important event, apologize for the situation, suggest a new arrangement. Nry70
Dear Kedar, Hi! I hope you're doing good with your studies. I'm writing this to tell you one good news and one bad too! As you already know my brother Jay, who is in his thirties and still single. But recently he managed to persuade the girl of his dreams. Recently he opened up with this matter with our parents, surprisingly both approved the proposal of him after they met the girl and her family members. From both sides, parents are eager to see their kids tying the knot as soon as possible. I was also waiting for this since ages, and finally, the time has arrived. However, families have fixed the wedding days during the time I have planned the trip to your country. I know you will be disappointed by these words, but I am sorry to say that I will have to postpone this visit. As I will be the main person in this celebration to manage the different rituals. However, for sure I will be there next summer vacation. During that time I'll make sure that there will be no excuse from my side. I'm really sorry that, this alteration might affect your plans too. I hope you'll understand the situation and will try to substitute for this. Lots of Love, Keyur
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Kedar
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Hi! I hope you're doing
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good
with your studies. I'm writing this to
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tell
you one
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good
news and one
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bad
too!

As you already know my brother Jay, who is in his thirties and
still
single.
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But
recently he managed to persuade the girl of his dreams. Recently he opened up with this matter with our parents,
surprisingly
both approved the proposal of him after they met the girl and her family members. From both sides, parents are eager to
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see
their kids tying the knot as
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soon
as possible. I was
also
waiting for this since ages, and
finally
, the time has arrived.
However
, families have
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fixed
the wedding days during the time I have planned the trip to your country. I know you will
be disappointed
by these words,
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but
I am sorry to say that I will
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have to
postpone this visit.
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As
I will be the main person in this celebration to manage the
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different
rituals.

However
, for sure I will be there
next
summer vacation. During that time I'll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that there will be no excuse from my side. I'm
really
sorry that, this alteration might affect your plans too.

I hope you'll understand the situation and will try to substitute for this.

Lots of
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Love
,

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Keyur
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IELTS letter you arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend, explain the important event, apologize for the situation, suggest a new arrangement.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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