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Dear MS. Jobhunt I am writing to express my interest in the nurse position you listed recently on the telegraph Network

Dear MS. Jobhunt I am writing to express my interest in the nurse position you listed recently on the telegraph Network nNaeo
Dear MS. Jobhunt I am writing to express my interest in the nurse position you listed recently on the telegraph Network, I have reviewed nurses. www. uz wep page and am very impressed because your warm attitude towards clients and the equipment at the hospital amazed me. I will be graduating from Medic University and am busy guardsman a retail nurse position. In addition, I have completed several courses nurse. I would like to explore the nurse position with your further. I will be in Uzbekistan the week of September 4 th and would be love to have the opportunity to speak with you at that time. Should you need additional information, please call me at 974396089. I look forward to hearing from you. SincerelySevinch
Dear MS.
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Jobhunt
I am writing to express my interest in the
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nurse
position you listed recently on the telegraph Network, I have reviewed
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nurses
.
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www
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uz
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wep
page and am
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very
impressed
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because
your warm attitude towards clients and the equipment at the hospital amazed me. I will be graduating from Medic University and am busy guardsman a retail
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nurse
position.
In addition
, I have completed several courses
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nurse
. I would like to explore the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nurse
position with your
further
. I will be in Uzbekistan the week of September
Did you mean "4th"?
4 th
and would be
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love
to have the opportunity to speak with you at that time. Should you need additional information,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
call me at 974396089. I look forward to hearing from you.
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SincerelySevinch
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IELTS letter Dear MS. Jobhunt I am writing to express my interest in the nurse position you listed recently on the telegraph Network

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  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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