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Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship

Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship a892X

Dear Sir, Madame, My name is Ismail El Omari, I'm from Morocco, I was extremely delighted to see the "Stipendium Hungaricum" Scholarship Program opportunity provided by Hungary. With this letter I would like to introduce myself and express my motivation. For me the Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship is a great financial aid to study abroad, especially in Hungary which has a long history and tradition in higher education, the reputation and the good ranking of the Hungarian universities will give me the opportunity to support my studies and let me do my best, also meeting people from all around the world will familiarize me with many cultures and increase my ability to relate to others, something that I believe is very important to improve my professional background. Currently I am in the last year of the Bachelor's Degree in Industrial Systems & Mechanical Engineering. I have a high school certificate in Electrical Sciences and Technologies, and a University Diploma of Technology in Industrial Engineering and Maintenance specialized in Electro-mechanics, during those years of studies I did 2 internships to become familiar with the industrial environment and to practice the academic knowledge. The versatility of my curriculum will allow me to continue my studies successfully in Engineering fields, especially MSc Mechatronics Engineering and MSc Mechanical Engineering. Thank you for your time to consider my application.

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Thank you for your time to consider my application. 