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Motivation letter for stipenduim hungaricum

Motivation letter for stipenduim hungaricum lxgW9
I am an elementarymedicinestudent at Debrecen University. With this letter, I hereby wish to state my interest and strong determination for joining the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Programme. With my rich background in sciences and mathematics, I strongly feel that joining your program will be of greatrelevanceto both my medical career and my personal development. At the age of ten, one of my greatest achievements was winning the 2000 Novel prize, after I had been selected to participate in an experiment for high school teen students. Upon joining high school, my great passion for science and mathematics saw me being selected to the highest level of the Mathematics and Science class, through a test score that is taken by many students in Japan. Nevertheless, in the course of my high school studies, I began developing this great passion towards pursuing a career in the medical field, thanks to my strong desire to become a global doctor. For this reason, I became keen to learn more about medicine and enrolled into the Japanese Medical School, immediately after graduating from my high school class, whereI am currently studying basic medicine andhopingto join a medical school in Hungary. Throughout my life, I have always actively engaged myself in volunteering, so as to gain experience as well as to give my personal contribution to the society. This experience has substantially fostered a desire in me to become a doctor and take part in the Medicine Sans Frontieres (MSF). However, in my pursuit of this goal, I realized that for me to become a member of MSF, Ineededto study Medical English. As a result, I decided to enroll into an overseas school, where I would perfect my Medical English skills. Just around this time, due to the mass displacement of refugees in Hungary, many Hungarian refugees ran into Europe, but others were barred from entering the country at the border. Watching this news broke my heart and whenever I watch the news and see the issue of the Hungarian refugees being brought up, I cannot help but wonder why this is such a big issue, instead of just helping Hungary become an independent nation that would stand politically correct in the world. Thanks to the many misgivings experienced by the refugees, I have developed this strong desire to study in Hungary since I am confident that as a foreign doctor in the country, I will be in a position to protect the countrys profit and also provide medical assistance to many of the refugees at the border. Critical emergency practice, is, however, my preferred department of practice, since I would really love to help many children and women at the border. For this reason, I fancy working as an MSF critical emergency doctor. Additionally, while in the course of my elementary medicine studies, I have gained the understanding that as a critical emergency doctor dealing with both women and children, I will need to study both gynecology and obstetrics. These professions will primarily help me pursue my goal to not only provide medical assistance to them but also to save the lives of the vulnerable children. In the same vein, I am adept and very well conversant with the IT field, something which I consider a significant advantage in the realm of my medical career. My passion for technology began at a very young age, and while in junior high school I assembled a computer from scratch, and this offered me a foundation for this passion. Thus, with my adept computer andinformationtechnology skills, combined with my medical profession, I am determined to explore vastareassuch as Artificial Intelligence (AI) so as to develop remote control cure systems which Ibelieveare urgently needed to help a majority of the refugees at the borders. In the context of technological inventions, I envision creating smart mobile communicating devices such as wearable watches, which can be used by sick refugee patients tocommunicatewith the remote doctors and nurses, whenever needed. This being said, I hope that through my medical profession, I will significantly contribute to trace big dates of the refugees and consequently protect both their medical and human rights. Besides, as I am seriously considering dedicating my medical profession in helping poor refugees in Hungary, I have decided to take part in the MSF explanation meeting which has considerably helped me develop a solid desire to study the state of the art system together with front-line therapy. This, I am certain, will equip me with the knowledge and information necessary for me to help the poor and struggling refugees in Hungary. Finally, I am overly determined to make the most out of the scholarship benefits. I ready and willing to devote myself and optimize every experience offered to me in the program. I am also confident that enrolling in your program would not only empower my career development but would also provide me with a framework to utilize my full potential. This being the case, I would sincerely appreciate ifchosento enroll in your scholarship program since this would bring me a step closer to achieving my goals. Yours truly, (Signature)
I am an
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elementarymedicinestudent
at
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Debrecen
University. With this letter, I hereby wish to state my interest and strong determination for joining the
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
Scholarship
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Programme
.

With my rich background in sciences and mathematics, I
strongly
feel that joining your
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program
will be of
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greatrelevanceto
both my
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medical
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career
and my personal development. At the age of ten, one of my greatest achievements was winning the 2000 Novel prize, after I had
been selected
to participate in an experiment for
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high
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school
teen students. Upon joining
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high
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school
, my great
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passion
for science and mathematics
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saw
me
being selected
to the highest level of the Mathematics and Science
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class
, through a
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test
score that
is taken
by
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many
students in Japan.
Nevertheless
, in the course of my
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high
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school
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studies
, I began developing this great
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passion
towards pursuing a
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career
in the
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medical
field, thanks to my strong
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desire
to
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become
a global
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doctor
.
For this reason
, I became keen to learn more about
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medicine
and enrolled into the Japanese
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Medical
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School
, immediately after graduating from my
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high
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school
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class
,
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whereI
am
currently
studying basic
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medicine
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andhopingto
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join
a
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medical
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school
in Hungary.

Throughout my life, I have always
actively
engaged myself in volunteering,
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so as to
gain experience
as well
as to give my personal contribution to the society. This experience has
substantially
fostered a
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desire
in me to
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become
a
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doctor
and
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take part
in the
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Medicine
Sans
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Frontieres
(MSF).
However
, in my pursuit of this goal, I realized that for me to
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become
a member of MSF,
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Ineededto
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study
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Medical
English.
As a result
, I decided to enroll into an overseas
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school
, where I would perfect my
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Medical
English
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skills
.
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Just
around this time, due to the mass displacement of
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refugees
in Hungary,
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many
Hungarian
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refugees
ran into Europe,
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but
others
were barred
from entering the country at the border.

Watching this news broke my heart and whenever I
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watch
the news and
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see
the issue of the Hungarian
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refugees
being brought
up, I cannot
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help
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but
wonder why this is such a
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big
issue,
instead
of
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just
helping Hungary
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become
an independent nation that would stand
politically
correct in the world. Thanks to the
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many
misgivings experienced by the
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refugees
, I have developed this strong
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desire
to
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study
in Hungary since I am confident that as a foreign
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doctor
in the country, I will be in a position to protect the
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countrys
profit and
also
provide
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medical
assistance to
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many
of the
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refugees
at the border.

Critical emergency practice, is,
however
, my preferred department of practice, since I would
really
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love
to
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help
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
children and women at the border.
For this reason
, I fancy working as an MSF critical emergency
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doctor
.
Additionally
, while in the course of my elementary
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medicine
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studies
, I have gained the understanding that as a critical emergency
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doctor
dealing with both women and children, I will need to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
both gynecology and obstetrics. These
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professions
will
primarily
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help
me pursue my goal to not
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only
provide
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medical
assistance to them
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but
also
to save the
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lives
of the vulnerable children.

In the same vein, I am adept and
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very
well conversant with the IT field, something which I consider a significant advantage in the realm of my
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medical
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career
. My
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passion
for technology began at a
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very
young age, and while in junior
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high
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school
I assembled a computer from scratch, and this offered me a foundation for this
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passion
.
Thus
, with my adept computer
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andinformationtechnology
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skills
, combined with my
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medical
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profession
, I
am determined
to explore
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vastareassuch
as Artificial Intelligence (AI)
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so as to
develop remote control cure systems which
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Ibelieveare
urgently
needed to
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help
a majority of the
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refugees
at the borders. In the context of technological inventions, I envision creating smart mobile communicating devices such as wearable
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watches
, which can be
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used
by sick
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refugee
patients
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tocommunicatewith
the remote
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doctors
and nurses, whenever needed. This
being said
, I hope that through my
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medical
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profession
, I will
significantly
contribute to trace
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big
dates of the
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refugees
and
consequently
protect both their
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medical
and human rights.

Besides
, as I am
seriously
considering dedicating my
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medical
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profession
in helping poor
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refugees
in Hungary, I have decided to
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take part
in the MSF explanation meeting which has
considerably
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helped
me develop a solid
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desire
to
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study
the
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state of the art
system together with front-line therapy. This, I am certain, will equip me with the knowledge and information necessary for me to
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help
the poor and struggling
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refugees
in Hungary.

Finally
, I am
overly
determined to
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make
the most out of the scholarship benefits. I ready and willing to devote myself and optimize every experience offered to me in the
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program
. I am
also
confident that enrolling in your
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program
would not
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only
empower my
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career
development
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but
would
also
provide me with a framework to utilize my full potential. This being the case, I would
sincerely
appreciate
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ifchosento
enroll in your scholarship
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program
since this would bring me a step closer to achieving my goals.

Yours
truly
,

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IELTS letter Motivation letter for stipenduim hungaricum

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
847 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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