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A letter applying for a plase on the course

A letter applying for a plase on the course LqM1G
Dear Sir. I am writing to apply for taking part in an History course offered by your University of Winston. I am 25 years old and I hold a bacholor degree in Gulistan State University and now I am an English teacher. You know to be a good teacher I have to history well. So I want to study in your course. The participation in such a course would be very helpful in my career. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your faithfullyGulnora Abdullayeva
Dear Sir. I am writing to apply for taking part in
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
History course offered by your University of Winston.

I am 25 years
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old
and I hold a
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bacholor
degree in
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Gulistan
State University and
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now
I am an English teacher. You know to be a
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good
teacher I
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have to
history well.
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So
I want to study in your course. The participation in such a course would be
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very
helpful in my career.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your
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faithfullyGulnora
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Abdullayeva
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IELTS letter A letter applying for a plase on the course

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
85 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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