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Application letter of course

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position bodyguard in the most famous beach Sussex. I am 25 years old, being guard for a few years I have sufficient expriement to take the job. The age of my twenty I started working this position, I am easygoing, punctual and hardworking person. And I have a deficiency that my colleagues always emphasize I do not know my getting tired time, and work from the morning till they stopped. My previous working please was good so I was in a good relation with them. After moving my working please, I had to search new job. Having heard your advertisement in the New York Times, I felt I was the most suitable candidate to the position. I am not only experimented person but also knowledgeable in speaking in different languages, depend on my qualities I believe I will be the best and reliable lifeguard all of. I am attaching my CV for providing you further information about me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. If you have any questions feel free to call me any time. Yours faithfully Pingoman
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to apply for the position bodyguard in the most
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famous
beach Sussex.

I am 25 years
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old
, being guard for a few years I have sufficient
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expriement
to take the job. The age of my twenty I
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started
working this position, I am easygoing, punctual and hardworking person. And I have a deficiency that my colleagues always emphasize I do not know my getting tired time, and work from the morning till they
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stopped
. My previous working
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please
was
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good
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so
I was in a
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good
relation with them. After moving my working
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please
, I had to search new job. Having heard your advertisement in the New York Times, I felt I was the most suitable candidate to the position. I am not
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only
experimented person
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but
also
knowledgeable in speaking in
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different
languages, depend on my qualities I believe I will be the best and reliable lifeguard all of. I am attaching my CV for providing you
further
information about me.

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I
look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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If
you have any questions feel free to call me any time.

Yours
faithfully
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Pingoman
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IELTS letter Application letter of course

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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