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Applying letter for lifeguard posission

Applying letter for lifeguard posission 0BOjO
I am writing to apply for the position bodyguard in the most famous beach Sussex. I am 25 years old, being guard for a few years I have suffesent expirement to take the job. The age of my twenty I started working this position, I am easygoing, punctual and hardworking person. And I have a deficiency that my colligues always emphasize I do not know my getting tired time, and work from the morning till they stopped. My previous working please was good so I was in a good relation with them. After moving my working please, I had to seach new job. Having heard your adertisement in the New York times, I felt I was the most suitable condidate to the position. I am not only expirimanted person but also knowladgeabe in speaking in different languages, depend on my qualities I belive I will be the best and relieble lifeguard all of. I am attaching my CV for providing you further information about me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. If you have any questions feel free to call me any time.
I am writing to apply for the position bodyguard in the most
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famous
beach Sussex.

I am 25 years
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old
, being guard for a few years I have
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suffesent
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expirement
to take the job. The age of my twenty I
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started
working this position, I am easygoing, punctual and hardworking person. And I have a deficiency that my
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colligues
always emphasize I do not know my getting tired time, and work from the morning till they
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stopped
. My previous working
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please
was
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good
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so
I was in a
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good
relation with them. After moving my working
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please
, I had to
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seach
new job. Having heard your
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adertisement
in the
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New York times
, I felt I was the most suitable
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condidate
to the position. I am not
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only
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expirimanted
person
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but
also
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knowladgeabe
in speaking in
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different
languages, depend on my qualities
Did you mean "I believe"?
I belive
I will be the best and
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relieble
lifeguard all of. I am attaching my CV for providing you
further
information about me.

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I
look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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If
you have any questions feel free to call me any time.
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IELTS letter Applying letter for lifeguard posission

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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