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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed.What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed? DWNA
Dear Mr. Mehta, How are you? I hope you are well. I am your renter who stay at your premises since 8months. I am writting this letter to request you to shorten the agreement of your premises. let me explain my problem in more detail, I work for government in the pention department. The government transferred my job duties in Ahmedabad. consequently, I need to shift from here to Ahmedabd with my family. Since, here in Rajkot no one elder person is there in my family except me and my wife to take care of my grand parents and my two children. So I have to carry all of them with me. I request you to finish the contract two moths early before it gets over. I appology for breaking the contract early but no other option is availble for me. I have to leave the flat before the contract finishes. Give my regardes to Sneha and pass my love to little Ayansh. Thank you for your cosideration. Yours sincerely, Amita.
Dear Mr.
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Mehta
,

How are you? I hope you are well. I am your renter who stay at your premises since 8months.
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I
am
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writting
this letter to request you to shorten the agreement of your premises.

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let
me
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explain
my problem in more detail, I work for
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government
in the
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pention
department. The
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government
transferred my job duties in Ahmedabad.
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consequently
, I need to shift from here to
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Ahmedabd
with my family. Since, here in Rajkot no one elder person is there in my family except me and my wife to take care of my grand parents and my two children.
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So
I
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have to
carry all of them with me.

I request you to finish the contract two moths early
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before
it
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gets
over. I
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appology
for breaking the contract early
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but
no other option is
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availble
for me.
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I
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have to
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leave
the flat
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before
the contract finishes.

Give my
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regardes
to
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Sneha
and pass my
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love
to
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little
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Ayansh
.

Thank you for your
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cosideration
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Amita
.
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IELTS letter Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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