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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.

A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. 1Bny
Dear Jane, I trust you are doing okay? My apologies I have not been able to return your calls or write back since your last letter to me. I have actually changed job roles that have kept me extremely busy and glued to my desk. Anyways how are you doing? How are your parents? And your girlfriend Mary? It has been a while and I miss you all. I am writing you owing to the fact that an Account manager role currently out in my organization. As you are aware, I work for a distribution company, and we help IT manufacturers distribute their products and services around Africa. This role is tactical as there are numerous competitive distribution companies all fighting for The market leader. The Job requires a young and smart customer-centric individual with accuracy in numbers. I know you were good in numbers and your interpersonal skill is top-notch which is an immensely good reason why I think you stand a chance to get the job and perform excellently well in the role. You may check on our company website to apply for the role or alternatively send your CV to my mailbox to give directly to the Human Resource Department. Kindly let I know if you are interested in this role and also note that the deadline for application is in 3 Days. Yours faithfully, John.
Dear Jane,

I trust you are doing okay? My apologies I have not been able to return your calls or write back since your last letter to me. I have actually
changed
job
roles
that have
kept
me
extremely
busy and glued to my desk. Anyways how are you doing? How are your parents? And your girlfriend Mary? It has been a while and I miss you all.

I am writing you owing to the fact that an Account manager
role
currently
out in my organization. As you are aware, I work for a distribution
company
, and we
help
IT manufacturers distribute their products and services around Africa. This
role
is tactical as there are numerous competitive distribution
companies
all fighting for The market leader. The Job requires a young and smart customer-centric individual with accuracy in numbers. I know you were
good
in numbers and your interpersonal
skill
is top-notch which is an
immensely
good
reason why I
think
you stand a chance to
get
the job and perform
excellently
well in the
role
. You may
check
on our
company
website to apply for the
role
or
alternatively
send
your CV to my mailbox to give
directly
to the Human Resource Department.

Kindly
let
I know if you
are interested
in this
role
and
also
note that the deadline for application is in 3 Days.

Yours
faithfully
,

John.
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IELTS letter A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
229 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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