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Letter Writing for favorite team

Letter Writing for favorite team aqarm

Dear BTS team, I was present in your latest concert in Los Angeles where you guys have rocked the entire city. I am Ron, who is a very die hearted fan of BTS from the time of your first album. Although I like the entire my super favorite is Jimin as he always is a multi tasker where he sings, dance, cares for his team members and makes audiences more active with his comic moves. In music, violin is my favorite and since the day I became a fan of your album, I started practicing songs, all songs released by BTS and have almost successfully succeeded in uploading all the videos in YouTube. My channel includes not only BTS songs but also some others from my own composition. There is one help Jimin and BTS could do for me that is to subscribe my channel and have some spare time to listen my instrumental music and pass your comments to improve. Yours faithfully, Ron

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started
 practicing songs, all songs released by BTS and have almost successfully
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 BTS songs This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 spare time to listen my instrumental music and pass your comments to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
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. Yours faithfully
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