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You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present

You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present LG16G
Dear Sir, I am writing to thank you on the invitation which I received yesterday. I am obliged to receive such an honour from your prestigious organization; however, I wish to learn a little more on this event. Let me ask you the details I would like to know. Firstly, I am unclear on the motive of this exhibition. That is to say, I am keen to develop my understanding on the nature of art that will be presented through this platform. Furthermore, if there are various forms of art to be showcased, how much area would be allocated to each portion? Moreover, it would be better if you provide a list of those who will participate in this event. Alternatively, do inform me on the fact if a few known figures, related to this field, will come to acknowledge the talent of artists. I look forward to you for your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Jay
Dear Sir,

I am writing to thank you on the invitation which I received yesterday. I
am obliged
to receive such an
honour
from your prestigious organization;
however
, I wish to learn a
little
more on this
event
.

Let
me ask you the
details
I would like to know.
Firstly
, I am unclear on the motive of this exhibition.
That is
to say, I am keen to develop my understanding on the nature of art that will
be presented
through this platform.
Furthermore
, if there are various forms of art to
be showcased
, how much area would
be allocated
to each portion?

Moreover
, it would be better if you provide a list of those who will participate in this
event
.
Alternatively
, do inform me on the fact if a few known figures, related to this field, will
come
to acknowledge the talent of artists.

I look forward to you for your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jay
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IELTS letter You have just received an invitation to an art exhibition. You would like more details about the event before you decide to go. Write a letter to the organiser asking for more details. In your letter • thank them for the invitation • ask what kind of art will be on display and the size of each section • ask if any of the artists will be present

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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