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You have taken a cruise on a holiday and have been disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the cruise provider. In your letter, say:      -  what went wrong      -  how you felt about it      -  what do you want to be done about it

You have taken a cruise on a holiday and have been disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the cruise provider. In your letter, say: - what went wrong - how you felt about it - what do you want to be done about it N8NVW
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my extreme dissatisafaction from your services as well as staff beaviour. In relation to booking, I booked cruise to give lovely candle light treat to celebrate my husband’s birthday during winter holidays. Although we reached at our booked date on 18th of decemeber; However your staff didn’t see any booking confirmation. Thus we shown theme confirmation id as well as payment recepit, but they behave rudly and not addressing properly even our requested concern. Having said that, we felt heartbroken because that day was very special for both of us as its first birthday of him after getting married. Although it well planned stll not celebrated because of technical error in your system. In solution, to compansate it we appreciate if you arrange same on 25th of december to enjoy Christmas as well as its our annivarsay date thus, we would delighted if you give booking confirmattion on prior basis. I am lookihg forward for your prior confirmation! Yous faithfully, Sati.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my extreme
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dissatisafaction
from your services as
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well
as staff
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beaviour
.

In relation to booking, I booked cruise to give lovely candle light treat to celebrate my husband’s birthday during winter holidays. Although we reached at our booked date on 18th of
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decemeber
;
However
your staff didn’t
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see
any booking confirmation.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
we
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shown
theme confirmation id as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as payment
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recepit
,
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but
they behave
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rudly
and not addressing
properly
even our requested concern.

Having said that, we felt heartbroken
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because
that day was
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very
special for both of us as its
first
birthday of him after getting married.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
planned
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stll
not celebrated
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because
of technical error in your system.

In solution, to
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compansate
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it
we appreciate if you arrange same on 25th of
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december
to enjoy Christmas as
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well
as
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its
our
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annivarsay
date
thus
, we would
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delighted
if you give booking
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confirmattion
on prior basis.

I am
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lookihg
forward for your prior confirmation!

Yous
faithfully
,

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Sati
.

IELTS letter You have taken a cruise on a holiday and have been disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the cruise provider. In your letter, say: - what went wrong - how you felt about it - what do you want to be done about it

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  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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