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Saving or buying new things.

Saving or buying new things. xxDVo
It is better to buy new things when they are not in good condition, but that depends on what item is, how often it is used, how efficient it is and so on. First, many people make the mistake of thinking they need to recycle everything, but the truth is you can reuse items that are in good condition or can be repaired without spending too much money. Moreover, the money you pay for repairing old things is not cheaper than buying new ones. Second, new items with beautiful designs and more modern functions than old ones. As you know, old things often do not have many functions and are not suitable for today's use requirements. For example, modern TVs have thinner and sharper screens. Finally, before purchasing new things, you should think of your budget. You need to consider carefully before buying to avoid buying unnecessary items. That helps us save money and can use the savings for future plans like buying a new house instead of renting. I hope the above sharing can help you in smart shopping.
It is better to
buy
new
things when they are not in
good
condition,
but
that depends on what
item
is, how
often
it is
used
, how efficient it is and
so
on.
First
,
many
people
make
the mistake of thinking they need to recycle everything,
but
the truth is you can reuse
items
that are in
good
condition or can
be repaired
without spending too much money.
Moreover
, the money you pay for repairing
old
things is not cheaper than
buying
new
ones
. Second,
new
items
with
beautiful
designs and more modern functions than
old
ones
. As you know,
old
things
often
do not have
many
functions and are not suitable for
today
's
use
requirements.
For example
, modern TVs have thinner and sharper screens.
Finally
,
before
purchasing
new
things, you should
think
of your budget. You need to consider
carefully
before
buying
to avoid
buying
unnecessary
items
. That
helps
us save money and can
use
the savings for future plans like
buying
a
new
house
instead
of renting. I hope the above sharing can
help
you in smart shopping.
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IELTS letter Saving or buying new things.

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6.0
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