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Restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters

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Dear sir, I read about a job vacancy in the post of a waiter in your restaurant through a local newspaper. I am looking forward to applying for this post with attached my resume. I am currently studying a master’s in civil engineering, and plan to work with your restaurant to enhance my experience. Eventually, during my leisure time, I take a baking clases for cakes. I am extremely fascnate about it. Along with that, I believe, I am suitable for this job because the restaurant quite close to my residence also, I am precise friendly with individual’s. In additionally, I have impressive in communication skills that are required for this occupation. Moreover, I-can speak four languages fluently such as Bengali, English, Hindi and Spanish which is rare skills nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I can come for interview tomorrow or at the time of your convenience. At the same time, I am looking forward your response. Your faithfully Nazmul Hasan
Dear sir,

I read about a job vacancy in the post of a waiter in your restaurant through a local newspaper. I am looking forward to applying for this post with attached my resume.

I
am
currently
studying a master’s in civil engineering, and plan to work with your restaurant to enhance my experience.
Eventually
, during my leisure time, I take a baking
clases
for cakes. I am
extremely
fascnate
about it.

Along with that, I believe, I am suitable for this job
because
the restaurant quite close to my residence
also
, I am precise friendly with individual’s. In
additionally
, I have impressive in communication
skills
that
are required
for this occupation.
Moreover
, I-can speak four languages
fluently
such as Bengali, English, Hindi and Spanish which is rare
skills
nowadays.

As far as I
am concerned
, I can
come
for interview tomorrow or at the time of your convenience. At the same time, I am looking forward your response.

Your
faithfully


Nazmul
Hasan
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IELTS letter Restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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