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Dear Sir, We are Tanis Import-Export Company, distributor of Frozen Shrimp, based in Vietnam, a small country well-known for exporting Shrimp to many countries. With the advantage of having numerous factories located in the shrimp farming material areas in Central and Southern Vietnam, we can ensure a stable supply, competitive figure, and quality products for export to the US market. After we went through your company information, we know that your company is importing Frozen Prawn from several regions. Hopefully, we hope to become your long-term partner, bringing you the most delicious and quality Frozen Shrimp from our country. Please have a look at the strength products that we are dealing with below. We have a note for you. In the above list, Vannamei PD is in season and has the best affordable figure at the moment compared to exporters in other countries. To offer you the best price, could you please give us the specification of Shrimp that you need in the upcoming purchases? We look forward to hearing from you shortly, Thank you and Regards
Dear Sir,

We are
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Tanis
Import-Export
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, distributor of Frozen
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Shrimp
, based in Vietnam, a
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small
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country
well-known for exporting
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Shrimp
to
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many
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countries
. With the advantage of having numerous factories located in the
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shrimp
farming material areas in Central and Southern Vietnam, we can ensure a stable supply, competitive figure, and quality products for export to the US market.

After we went through your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
information, we know that your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is importing Frozen Prawn from several regions.
Hopefully
, we hope to become your long-term partner, bringing you the most delicious and quality Frozen
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Shrimp
from our
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country
.
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Please
have a look at the strength products that we are dealing with below.

We have a note for you. In the above list,
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Vannamei
PD is in season and has the best affordable figure at the moment compared to exporters in other
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countries
. To offer you the best price, could you
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please
give us the specification of
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Shrimp
that you need in the upcoming
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purchases
?

We look forward to hearing from you shortly,

Thank you and Regards
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IELTS letter write an offer email to introduce your prododucts

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5.5
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