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Do you work in the office and experiencing health problems

Do you work in the office and experiencing health problems PVM0p

Dear Smith, I am glad to be a part of NH company from one year. Nowadays, I am confronting an intense issue that is my back problem. I am having pain at my back. As, I have visited to the doctor, he told me the reason of bad back is improper movement of spinal joints. It was caused by a working conditions in the office. The furniture which is provided by the company needs to change. The chair is uncomfortable. The table is also not equal to my seating position. Because of unadjustable seat, I am unable to move myself. I am requesting you to take some stringent measures to solve this quandary by providing some adjustable chair with armrest. The big table which should be equal to my level so that I do not need to bed myself all the time to take out documents from drawers. Hopeful to hear back from you soon. Yours faithfully, Anna

Dear Smith,

I am glad to be a part of NH This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 from one year. Nowadays, I am confronting an intense issue that is
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back
 problem. I am having pain at my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
. As, I have visited to the doctor, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me the reason of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbackward
back
 is improper movement of spinal joints.

It was caused
 by a working conditions in the office. The furniture which is provided
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 needs to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. The chair is uncomfortable. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 table is also
 not equal to my seating position. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
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unadjustable
 seat, I am unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 myself.

I am requesting you to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 stringent measures to solve this quandary by providing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adjustable chair with armrest. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 table which should be equal to my level This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I do not need to bed myself all the time to take out documents from drawers.

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back
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Anna