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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. v. 3

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. v. 3 6xlBK

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to let you know that I see your advertisement in a Australian magazine and you looking a caregiver for 6 months child. I am quite interested in this work. Let me explain my situation in full detail. My name is john and I am living in Australia with my parents. Actually, I also done my study in child care. This is a special course for children and I love kids. I like to spend time with small babies. However, I have a one year experience. My last job was very fabulous. I was handling two little children. Due to the fact, Both were too attached with me. I would like to join this job in this month. I am a good caregiver and I provided all care which you want for your six months children like food and more over. If you interested in my resume then please give me feedback. I am waiting your response. Thank you, Yours faithfully, john.

Dear Sir,

I am writing a letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 your advertisement in Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 Australian magazine and Did you mean "you're looking", "you are looking", or "you were looking"?you're lookingyou are lookingyou were looking
you looking
 a caregiver for 6 months child. I am quite interested in this work.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my situation in full detail. My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).john, and
john and
 I am living in Australia with my parents. Actually, I also
 done my study in child care. This is a special course for children and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 kids. I like to spend time with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 babies. However
, I have a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-year"one-year
one year
 experience. My last job was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 fabulous. I was handling two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 children. Due to the fact, Both were too attached with me.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 this job in this month. I am a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 caregiver and I provided all care which you want for your six months children like food and more over. If you interested in my resume then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 give me feedback.

I am waiting your response.

Thank you,

Yours faithfully
, john. 