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Write a letter to Authority on the issues of the road infront of your house. Tell what it is, how it affect you and others and what should be done

Write a letter to Authority on the issues of the road infront of your house. Tell what it is, how it affect you and others and what should be done PRy5E
Dear Sir, I am James and i am writing to draw your attention to a serious concern of ours that we have been facing since last December. The road in front of house has been destroyed, and we are unable to travel through that way because of the potholes and the water that is getting accumulated in it. All the problems started when the new road construction was started on the parallel side our neighbourhood. It was assured that the road will finish its work within three months but, unfortunately till date the work is in progress whereby all the vehicles including the heavy ones are using our road for transit. This has paved way for all our problems, Vehicles of the local people are getting destroyed as well as many bike riders come across accidents because they are unable to understand the pits because of the water in it. Last week one of my neighbour broke his leg as he fell into one of the pod hole. We have been complaining about the issue to the contractor who is in charge of the construction, but we have not received any favourable response. Hence we request you to kindly see through the issue seriously and take a reasonable solution to the issue. Awaiting a positive response from your side, Thanking you in advance, Yours faithfully, James
Dear Sir,

I am James and
i
am writing to draw your attention to a serious concern of ours that we have been facing since last December. The
road
in front of
house
has been
destroyed
, and we are unable to travel through that way
because
of the potholes and the water
that is
getting accumulated in it.

All the problems
started
when the new
road
construction was
started
on the parallel side our
neighbourhood
. It
was assured
that the
road
will finish its work within three months
but
, unfortunately till date the work is in progress whereby all the vehicles including the heavy ones are using our
road
for transit. This has paved way for all our problems,

Vehicles of the local
people
are getting
destroyed
as well
as
many
bike riders
come
across accidents
because
they are unable to understand the pits
because
of the water in it. Last week one of my
neighbour
broke his leg as he fell into one of the pod hole.

We have been complaining about the issue to the contractor who is in charge of the construction,
but
we have not received any
favourable
response.
Hence
we request you to kindly
see
through the issue
seriously
and take a reasonable solution to the issue.

Awaiting a
positive
response from your side,

Thanking you in advance,

Yours
faithfully
,

James
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IELTS letter Write a letter to Authority on the issues of the road infront of your house. Tell what it is, how it affect you and others and what should be done

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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