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Write a letter to Authority on the issues of the road infront of your house. Tell what it is, how it affect you and others and what should be done

Write a letter to Authority on the issues of the road infront of your house. Tell what it is, how it affect you and others and what should be done PRy5E

Dear Sir, I am James and i am writing to draw your attention to a serious concern of ours that we have been facing since last December. The road in front of house has been destroyed, and we are unable to travel through that way because of the potholes and the water that is getting accumulated in it. All the problems started when the new road construction was started on the parallel side our neighbourhood. It was assured that the road will finish its work within three months but, unfortunately till date the work is in progress whereby all the vehicles including the heavy ones are using our road for transit. This has paved way for all our problems, Vehicles of the local people are getting destroyed as well as many bike riders come across accidents because they are unable to understand the pits because of the water in it. Last week one of my neighbour broke his leg as he fell into one of the pod hole. We have been complaining about the issue to the contractor who is in charge of the construction, but we have not received any favourable response. Hence we request you to kindly see through the issue seriously and take a reasonable solution to the issue. Awaiting a positive response from your side, Thanking you in advance, Yours faithfully, James

Dear Sir,

I am James and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am writing to draw your attention to a serious concern of ours that we have been facing since last December. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in front of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
, and we are unable to travel through that way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the potholes and the water that is
 getting accumulated in it.

All the problems This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 when the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 construction was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 on the parallel side our Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
. It was assured
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 will finish its work within three months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, unfortunately till date the work is in progress whereby all the vehicles including the heavy ones are using our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 for transit. This has paved way for all our problems,

Vehicles of the local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
as well
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 bike riders This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across accidents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are unable to understand the pits This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the water in it. Last week one of my Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
 broke his leg as he fell into one of the pod hole.

We have been complaining about the issue to the contractor who is in charge of the construction, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we have not received any Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 response. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 we request you to kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 through the issue seriously
 and take a reasonable solution to the issue.

Awaiting a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from your side,

Thanking you in advance,

Yours faithfully
,

James