Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Informal letter request friend to take care of pet

Informal letter request friend to take care of pet N3wAb
Dear Smitha, Hope you are doing good. Thank you for agreeing to baby sit my child and taking care of my pet as I will be away for work. I owe you a big one. If you need to contact me for any reason, you may contact me at my office, or you have my mobile number and don’t hesitate to call if you need to reach me. I keep my mobile phone with me at all times. My pup needs to be fed twice a day, morning and evening. Put some dog food in his dish which I have put in the kitchen pantry. I have stocked enough food for him and all the packets are placed in the Kitchen cabinet. After he finishes his food, take him for a walk. Please, give him a small bowl of milk in the evening. Sumith(kid) will be playing on his own just check with him by keeping an eye. Please also check on him to have lunch, dinner, and bottle feed in the evening. I've kept all his baby food in the fridge, you can warm a little and give. Please feel free to watch T. V, magazines have snacks and food and make yourself comfortable. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Mary You's lovingly
Dear
Possible spelling mistake found.
Smitha
,

Hope you are doing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. Thank you for agreeing to baby sit my child and taking care of my pet as I will

be away for work. I owe you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
one.

If you need to contact me for any reason, you may contact me at my office, or you have my mobile

number and don’t hesitate to call if you need to reach me. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my mobile phone with me at all times.

My pup needs to
be fed
twice a day, morning and evening. Put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
dog
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
in his dish which I have

put in the kitchen pantry. I have stocked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
for him and all the packets
are placed
in the

Kitchen cabinet. After he finishes his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, take him for a walk.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, give him a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
bowl of milk in

the evening.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sumith
(kid) will be playing on his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
with him by keeping an eye.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
on him

to have lunch, dinner, and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
bottle feed
in the evening. I've
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
all his baby
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
in the fridge, you can

warm a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
and give.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
feel free to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
T. V, magazines have snacks and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make


yourself comfortable.

I look forward to seeing you on my return. Mary

You's
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
lovingly
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Informal letter request friend to take care of pet

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts