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Appologize friend in the school

Appologize friend in the school Yk8md
My dear friend AkbarjonI hope you will understand when I say that, my friend Otabek lost your book. My friend Otabek lost yours book be the cause or reason, my friend Otabek read your book in classroom. My friend Otabek give yours book his classmate and his classmate lost yours book. Iam be quity lost yours book, because, I give yours book to my friend Otabek. I, my friend Otabek and his classmate sorry for lost yours book. We find other very interesting book for your and we give other book to you or we give money. Only, you pardon me, my friend Otabek and his classmate. I hope you belive me when I say how sorry I not give yours book to other people and I not lost yours book and I, my friend Otabek, his clasmate correct our mistake. Only you pardon we. Yours old friend Ziyodbek
My dear
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friend
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AkbarjonI
hope you will understand when I say that, my
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friend
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Otabek
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lost
your
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book
. My
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friend
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Otabek
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lost
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yours
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book
be the cause or reason, my
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friend
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Otabek
read your
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book
in classroom.
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My
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friend
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Otabek
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give
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yours
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book
his
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classmate
and his
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classmate
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lost
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yours
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book
.
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Iam
be
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quity
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lost
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yours
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book
,
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because
, I
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give
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yours
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book
to my
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friend
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Otabek
. I, my
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friend
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Otabek
and his
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classmate
sorry for
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lost
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yours
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book
. We find other
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very
interesting
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book
for
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your and
we
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give
other
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book
to you or we
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give
money.
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Only
, you pardon me, my
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friend
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Otabek
and his
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classmate
. I hope
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you belive
me when I say how sorry I not
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give
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yours
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book
to other
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people
and I not
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lost
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yours
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book
and I, my
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friend
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Otabek
, his
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clasmate
correct our mistake.
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Only
you pardon we.
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Yours
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old
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friend
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Ziyodbek

IELTS letter Appologize friend in the school

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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