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Write a letter to the company asking them a room to conduct an exam

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Hi, Good Morning. The Wave 1 IELTS Batch has concluded the classroom training. The two candidates, Gaurav and Ramanjeet, sound confident with Listening & Reading modules. Gaurav has practiced his writing task 1 & 2 and is showing clear signs of improvement, whereas, Ramanjeet hasn't showed any Writing so far in spite of repeated reminders to rehearse as much as they can. I have given them the tips to write the Writing Task1 & Task2 along with the reading material & practice tests. Now it's up to them to practice and improve their expression and writing styles. I have clearly advised them to devote a lot of time towards writing exercise as it's a skill, thus, cannot be developed overnight. As planned earlier, I would like to conduct a full length exam for LWRS (Listening, Writing, Reading and Speaking) on 16th August 2019 (Friday). The expected duration of the test is 2. 5hrs and another 1hr for discussions, final thoughts and test day preparations. Hence, I would need a room from 5pm onwards for the same.
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The Wave 1 IELTS Batch has concluded the classroom training. The two candidates, Gaurav and
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Ramanjeet
, sound confident with Listening & Reading modules. Gaurav has practiced his
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task 1 & 2 and is showing
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signs of improvement, whereas,
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them the tips to write the
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Writing
Task1 & Task2 along with the reading material & practice
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.
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it's up to them to practice and
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improve
their expression and
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styles. I have
clearly
advised them to devote
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a lot of
time towards
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writing
exercise as it's a
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,
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, cannot
be developed
overnight.

As planned earlier, I would like to conduct a full length exam for
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LWRS
(Listening,
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, Reading and Speaking) on 16th August 2019 (Friday). The
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expected
duration of the
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is 2. 5hrs and another 1hr for discussions, final thoughts and
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day preparations.
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, I would need a room from 5pm onwards for the same.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the company asking them a room to conduct an exam

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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